|Reviews for The Great Escape|
| writeratheart007 chapter 1 . 7/12
Other than a few grammatical errors (like transposing a few letters, something I do ALL of the time) your writing is wonderful. And for a one-off you made it long and full of detail. And I loved the addition of Septim in there, she's always been ignored for the most part. I have every intention of checking out your list of what else you've written.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/8
Fantastic. And I loved the inclusion of Astarre and Septima. I'm about to hop over to your profile to see if you have other stories.
| Bronze chapter 1 . 7/7
This is what Harry and Hermione really should've done instead of actually sticking around. Bumblemore screwed Harry's life up so badly that he never even had a childhood. It really and truly wouldn't surprise me at all if Bumbles set the Potters up in the first place. JKR has never said, that I know of, if the Potters had another, more secure place to live. Now if they had someplace with superior wards that would've kept old snakeface out, was it Bumbles who convinced them to move to the Hollow? Or did Bumbles use a compulsion charm on them to make them move to a much less secure house? Either makes sense to me as he wanted Harry for his supposed greater good.
| Snaggledog chapter 1 . 6/29
I really enjoyed this story. I usually don't like stories this short but this one was worth it.
| adafrog chapter 1 . 3/30
| PWAAH chapter 1 . 3/5
This had a wonderful start until the overdramatic romantic overtures promptly ruined the mood. Not that romance is bad, just that in this form they were ready to profess their love in an instant... and get BETROTHED in like a day. Completely at odds with both (mostly Hermione's) personalities. I get that teenagers don't have much self control (frontal lobe still uploading), but that was a little much.
| mysinger chapter 1 . 2/23
Excellent story! I really enjoyed it.
| Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 1/18
| toile grant chapter 1 . 1/2
| Blazeb79 chapter 1 . 12/13/2015
Lol, good twist n plot.
| PoseidonPrince chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
| katmom chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
This was a great twist on canon. Thank you so very much for sharing. I especially liked the Dragon bits.
| mobulis chapter 1 . 10/6/2015
What do you mean there's no trace of the age limiter, the twins were affected by it so it was there.
| desireejones99 chapter 1 . 9/25/2015
Exceptional entertainment, sad that it was so short (1 chapter) but it was long enough thanks
| featherdusterpixie chapter 1 . 9/15/2015