Reviews for Khaveyrim |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Found this on Ao3. Brilliant writing. Saw the John Ringo nod. Nice. Very fun. Hoping this isn't on permanent hiatus - drop me a line if you need a beta. |
![]() ![]() ![]() looking foward to the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() still one of my favorites |
![]() ![]() ![]() would love some update (inclusion of the other NCIS (maybe knowing Sam, Hetty, G., Granger in more personal kind of way) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This just became one of my all time favourite stories! It's perfect just the way it is:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read this story three times now and I truly do hope you decide to continue it at some point. thanks for writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story, hope you decide to continue it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found your story. I really liked it. and the quotes you used made me expand my horizons. |
![]() ![]() ![]() no aw uni, BB 2 |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very very dissapointing ending. basically: ziva saved tangos down the end |
![]() ![]() ![]() you get far to technical for my tastes |
![]() ![]() ![]() i did not felt like you captured the soldier vibe, too unprofessional, but then im only guessing at what is professional. it def has jack squat to do with harry potter though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story, please continue writing. |