Reviews for Khaveyrim
Guest chapter 6 . 1/16
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Sonicdale chapter 6 . 1/6
Found this on Ao3.
Brilliant writing. Saw the John Ringo nod. Nice. Very fun.
Hoping this isn't on permanent hiatus - drop me a line if you need a beta.
mauricio11 chapter 6 . 5/5/2024
looking foward to the next chapter
gerald.lenard123 chapter 6 . 2/20/2024
still one of my favorites
macslan chapter 6 . 1/15/2024
would love some update (inclusion of the other NCIS (maybe knowing Sam, Hetty, G., Granger in more personal kind of way)
cameron1812 chapter 6 . 2/20/2023
This just became one of my all time favourite stories! It's perfect just the way it is:)
Eleets1125 chapter 1 . 1/25/2023
I've read this story three times now and I truly do hope you decide to continue it at some point. thanks for writing
michaelc100 chapter 5 . 12/27/2022
great story, hope you decide to continue it
2bananacurls chapter 6 . 5/29/2022
I just found your story. I really liked it. and the quotes you used made me expand my horizons.
TangoTwo chapter 1 . 4/18/2022
no aw uni, BB 2
Maverick123214685 chapter 6 . 2/17/2022
great story!
scyfly chapter 6 . 2/17/2022
very very dissapointing ending. basically: ziva saved tangos down the end
scyfly chapter 4 . 2/17/2022
you get far to technical for my tastes
scyfly chapter 2 . 2/17/2022
i did not felt like you captured the soldier vibe, too unprofessional, but then im only guessing at what is professional.

it def has jack squat to do with harry potter though
Leticia Melo de Andrade chapter 6 . 1/22/2022
Very good story, please continue writing.
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