|Reviews for Khaveyrim|
| Aima chapter 6 . 4/14
Minor editing fail around the third (?) shell from St. A. landing.
Other than that great fic. I like your detailed style and need to show character development, rather than having it all take place of screen.
Don't worry about the timing of your chapter releases, you're good enough people will stick with the story regardless and poor research isn't your style.
| Knowledge is Power chapter 6 . 4/8
I loved this story! Please update soon.
| Josh chapter 6 . 4/3
I love this story concept and i love your writing style, this is one the best stories i have read on this site, keep it up i cant wait to find out what happens next!
| paulmoss chapter 6 . 4/5
Loving this story. It makes a brilliant alternative to your other story Per Ardua. This story is very well written, it flows so the reader is pulled along through the story. Keep up the good work.
| Woeful Indeed chapter 6 . 4/5
Seriously, your writing is addictive mate... In your later writing I'd say on par with Tom Clancy for military fiction. I've just read through everything you've posted and am eagerly awaiting more.
| RAD092515 chapter 6 . 4/3
As usual great chapter. Mix of what happened on the show but providing extra to make it better. Looking forward to the next chapter.
| leah chapter 6 . 3/31
more soon please (and paaa)
| SeleenaMarieDragonMistress chapter 1 . 3/17
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| MasterShadowAssassin chapter 6 . 3/17
Love your stories you you write more and update the ones you already have-MSA
| BikerSHAM chapter 6 . 3/13
Awesome work here ! VERY detailed, and realistic, almost "Clancy or Griffen" work...
Take that from a former 3/75th HHC Sniper as you will...
I think you should look into a few x-overs with two of your own stories. At least a small tie in from the International Slave ring in "Sic Semper Tyrannis" . Or even use some of those "owed" missions to Lambert in "Watchtower, Inc ". I think that your Harry Potter and Sam Fisher need to have a meeting of sorts...
Eagerly anticipating your next updates ! Keep up the GREAT work !
| steez18 chapter 6 . 3/4
I love the story so far. I hope you dont give up on it
| awhite535 chapter 6 . 3/1
this is a great chapter looking forward to the next one.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/26
| 1sunfun chapter 6 . 2/11
A really interesting story.
Normally not really my cup of tea but I am glad I gave it a try.
| ANIMAE chapter 6 . 2/7
great story so please update more soon.