Reviews for Silver Lining
Sociallyawkwardwriterr chapter 19 . 8/27/2013
Wow, I really thought she wouldn't follow Summer, but she did and it was awesome. Even if Lightning was a bit apprehensive when Summer touched her near the end, I hope she'll get over that fear soon. Thanks for updating, I'm really loving your story.

I reread the last few chapters several times and I really love the Summer/Lightning pairing that you've created. But if Fang comes back into the picture in the future, or when Summer goes back to gran pulse, will it change? Like when they see eachother next will they continue where they left of with that level of intimacy or will it be awkward. Maybe Summer will feel bad about it or something, because with her going back to Gran Pulse Fang will be there.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next chapter, and hoping you don't take long with it :)

Lia
The Enchantress chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Madame Prudence, Great Story. Who will Seduce Whom? What will Summer Wear to Seduce Her Pink-Haired Cocoonian Love Squeeze?
Belle chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
If Summer asks Light to not Hold back, to Give in to Her Desires, I have a Idea, taken from Titanic movie: As Cam approaches the Car, A fogged window, and a Hand presses against the Window, as Leonardo Decaprio finally orgasms with that character, perhaps something similar, not in a Car Mind You, But Somewhere Private, No Serah or anyone, perhaps on Gran Pulse, Lush Lagoon, as Their swimming, as Light gets Hot With Summer, Her Lust and Bliss turns to Love, then Power, Then Obsession, similar to what Fang did on Light, Light Mirroring Fang in many ways, but Summer tells Light to Release Her Inner Beast, Foreplay, Rough, Light almost crossing fine line to Raping Summer, but in a confused way, She can't let go of Fang too easily, Summer giving Light a Blowjob, to Riding Light Cowgirl, As Light Reaches Her absolute Limits and Squeezes out Her Cum, Summer Acts like a Mate to Light, Comforting, Moaning, wouldn't surprise me If Summer Courted Light in order To Mate
Belle chapter 19 . 8/26/2013
So Sad, Yet Raw Passion, Summer Must Encourage Light to Let go of Her Hesitations, to Release Her Inner Beast, So When Light is Wearing That Dilda and Screws Summer's Brains out, Summer can Heal Light, Yun Style. Only thing, is when Light Orgasms and Releases Her Hotseed, How Will Summer React? Feeling HotPissSperm flow in, That feeling...
The Beast chapter 19 . 8/26/2013
Luv This, Getting Better and Better. Light shouldn't Hesitate, Summer's Definitely Not. But When Light Puts On that Shining Starp-on Dilda, and as She's Getting Hot and Heavy With Summer, question is, will she be Gentle, or go completely Nuts, like insanely crazy, Rough, Brute Strength, No Holds barred sex, Summer Squealing, Babies and all
Anonymous Prime chapter 19 . 8/26/2013
Ah, Brought Tears to me Eyes, Light Finally has Moved on to a Dead drop Gorgeous Yun, But do We Hear Wedding Bells in Their Futures?
Autonomous Prick chapter 19 . 8/26/2013
I Wonder, When Ch.20 is Ready for Us All. Hopefully Nxt Ch will have Light or Summer Wearing that Beautiful Thing, Toys from Heaven To pleasure Them Both in Eternal Bliss
Bad Baby chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
WAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Definitely love this. I wonder, when Light does don that Strap-on and Bangs Summer, How would Light Respond if Summer Asks Light to Release all Her Steam and Energy, To Be Extremely rough, Almost asking Light to Literally Rape Her, Raw, Uncontained, Uncontrolled Passion, Power, Might, Foreplay Rough Sex
Dalish Elf chapter 19 . 8/25/2013
Meat! I love fluff! it is believable that light would still had that fear and I am so glad that she stayed
Naughty Tink chapter 19 . 8/25/2013
I Wonder, If Summer is gonna wear the Strap-on, or Is it gonna be Lightning. If Summer gets Pregnant With Light's Babies, W/O that concoction Cocktail Pregnancy Formula, It's safe to say Summer has that Magic Charm. Though Still I Prefer Fang and Light Personally, I could settle for this, Summer Healing Lightning Sexually, Spiritually, Sensually, Even Wanting to Mate With Lightning and then both Mating With Fang, a Threesome, that would be Awesome. Now when They do Find Little Miss Bitch Jihl, What will They start With? Hhhhhhhmmmmmmmm
Naughty Bear chapter 19 . 8/25/2013
Allow Me to Introduce to You All, The Future Mrs Light, AAHHHHHGGGGGGG
Crow chapter 19 . 8/25/2013
Its getting so good I don't know what to say. *gives thumbs up * i totally ship Slight
SleepyCrimson Ninja chapter 19 . 8/25/2013
wonderful, i love it, thou some 'extra' help woulda spiced it a bit more! but hey, your fic...so you decide, update soon a'right...
u chapter 19 . 8/25/2013
I love your writing.
SideQuester chapter 19 . 8/25/2013
All I can think to say right now is: nice! Very, very nice! Summer and Lightning; YES! XD

I have to say though, it is pretty sad that both Lightning AND Summer feel that they have to move past Fang. Part of me hopes that it won't actually come to that because, seriously, where does that leave Fang? Also, it's pretty clear that Lightning still has some serious intimacy issues to work through. Can't blame her after what happened with Fang. Seriously, damn that Jihl!

Great chapter as always, and the ending was excellent! Totally in love with this story!
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