Im only one chapter in and already Im heartbroken that Victoria and Rosalie wont be mates. I had already envisioned it in my head.

I love it! thanks for the amazing story!

OMG DIDYME? I love you!

OMG First of all, I started reading this yesterday before sleeping and continued to read while I work today. I must confessed I've been laughing a while here. Bella is relatable AF.
I had some comments in mind but I forgot HAHAHAHAHAHAH but anyways, I hope you're doing fine!

You forgot the energy thingy sucking of bella

Tanya can't have sex right? After bella?

okay so i know this story is finished but just thought what if... Loch Nest Moster we would still get our nessie LMFAO i am rolling but just thought ya know with her canon daughters nickname it would be hilarious and awesome if they went swimming with nessie

how did you do this in one single chapter you have ne wrapped around your finger i am fucking crying right now because of this and i am one chapter in but i also felt the joy and happiness from bella and Victoria man you are such an amazing author to be able to make me feel all this in a single chapter it is astounding truly thank you from the bottom of my heart

I love it. Thank you.

This is one of my favorite twilight fanfics out there.

Why would not mates hunt together ? why else do those two always go together ?

Bella/Heidi

this has been a very interesting and good story overall. i enjoyed it from start to finish as i devoured my way through it lol. this take on things has been one of the best that i have come across in a while :). though nods i know it was written and finished some years ago. regardless i only really had two issues with the fic. firstly would have like to in the ending chapter before this one, i would have like to in that chapter seen small brief povs towards the end showing briefly what everyone had been getting up to over the years. the ending was good just seemed to also fizzle out and felt rushed for lack of better term. though nods i understand that at the time it was the authors first twilight fic nods. the 2nd other issue i had is in this chapter i wish there had been more outtakes or that what had been the outtakes had been added into the main story organically speaking if that makes sense. like i said minor issues but still things to take note of :). regardless of all that i really did enjoy the unique spin on things and im glad things all went the way they did for everyone in this fic. will deff be rereading this when the mood strikes me or when i need to satiate my thirst of twilight fics xD

love this story man

love this story but did they have to be barefooted the whole time? that's disgusting