|Reviews for Dark Tyranny|
| Shadow chapter 5 . 3/2
Great story. Hope the heroes escape soon. Really excited for your next chapter.
| dark nightmere chapter 5 . 1/18
I think that Kairi should run off to face Aqua beleiving that her skills are strong enough to take her down but be easily beaten by the other woman who will smile as she prepares to take Kairi but Mickey will intervene. I think that as Mickey looks at Aqua with horror from what she has become he will fight her manageing to force her back but not finish the fight as Aqua falls back but Dounld and Goofy will chase after her. I think that Lea should come face to face with Xemnas as the dark corridor leads him there and be forced to try and fight off the leader of the Orgenization. I think that Sora should try to fight off Larxene and Marluxia but be easily subdued by them but Dounld and Goofy will arrive just in time to save Sora and fight off the two mumbers. I think that Riku should continue to try and find a way out of the castle and come face to face with Lexaeus who will challenge Riku to fight him to prove his strengh but Riku will be easily defeated by the silent hero. I think that Xemnas will smile as he looks at Lea knowing that he has fallen right into there trap and soon the other escapes will be recaptered. I think that Vanitas will smile as he looks at Naomi knowing that soon she will be there 13th darkness and then all the worlds will fall to darkness. I think that Ventus should interfene nearing the end of the pregnancy maybe a day or two before she gives birth and save the baby but Naomi will be lost as he gives the baby a perfectly balenced heart. I think that Ansem should try to force the darkness into Riku and break his will with Naomi's help but underestimate the strengh of his heart but as the darkness continues to grow in Riku over the coming mouths Ansem will smile knowing that his new host will soon be ready. I think that Sora, Dounld and Goofy should face off with Aqua in the entrance hall where they intend to escape from and be easily defeated until Sora calls on the light and unleashes a trinity attack forcing her back. I think that Mickey and Kairi should be lared to the keyblade graveyard by Aqua later in the story because she intends to kiddnap the princess once more and claim her heart.
| BelieverofManyThings chapter 5 . 1/18
OMG Great chapter :-D Wonder whats going to happen to Sora now. Really cant wait for your next update :-D
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/13
I have just discovered this and this story to say the least is amazing! I would like to see more about Sora if you are continuing and/or about Riku cause I like reading AU like this.
| xStarx chapter 4 . 10/13/2013
This is a brilliant story. Love the storyline and the characters. This is really good. Hope you update soon.
| dark nightmere chapter 4 . 9/29/2013
I think that Leon and Riku should work on trying to escape the castle but get lost inside it's passageways evently coming out to prove of extanice where Xemnas will be consorting with Isa about his mission and to leave soon to capture the last of the radiant Garden restanice. I think that Naomi should always be simler to Vanitas because of all the experiments that Aqua and Vanitas have done to her would have broken her mind mostly. I think that Riku should finely be recaptured in the last two-three days of Naomi's pregnancy meaning he will not have enough time to make a proper bond with the girl. I think that Dounld and Goofy should set out to rescue Sora and Riku soon after Kairi begins her training but Aqua will have antispated this and launch her own attack on the Mystrius tower to try and capture Kairi. I think that Mickey should clash keyblades with Aqua but not know it is her because her hood is up but her skills and style of fighting should remind him of someone he knew long ago. I think that when Xemnas finely recapture Riku in the training rooms he will know that the boy is to late to save Naomi and tell him that Sora has abandoned him and already escaped and left him behind this will stregthen the darkness within Riku's heart. I think that Naomi should own twisted love for Vanitas should have began to grow from all this time being held captive by him would have slowly began to make her fall for Vanitas. I think that Riku should try to save Naomi but fail because her eyes will hold a perment amber taint to them as she looks at this strange boy while rubbing her belly showing lords of dark shockwaves. I think that Ventus should be the one who truely saves Naomi and the baby by using his light to fight off Vanitas darkness and Aqua's he should heal the baby of there darkness.
| BelieverofManyThings chapter 4 . 9/28/2013
Another great chapter :-D Loving it ! Really cant wait for your next update :-D
| BelieverofManyThings chapter 3 . 9/15/2013
OMG. Just found this story. This is fantastic. I love the story line its really interesting :-D Hope you continue on with this I am really looking foward to your next update :-D
| dark nightmere chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
I think that Riku should end up in a cell of darkness because Vexen would have just come back from exmaining some of the priseners that where captured from Radiant Garden before giving his report to Ansem. I think that Ansem should recapture Riku and hual him back to the experiment room where he will strenghen the ropes so that Riku cannot escape again. I think that Sora should summon his keyblade forth to help him and Lea escape just as Dounld and Gooffy infaltrate the castle to rescue him and Riku. I think that Aqua should begin her experiments on Naomi in the next chapter but be interopted by the alarm sigleing that some of the priseners are trying to escape. I think that Xemnas should be the one who recaptures Riku because he will find him and bring him back. I think that Aqua should confront Sora, Dounld,Gooffy and Lea at the entrance of the castle with rage across her face as she aims to stop them with her keyblade pure darkness in her hand she should try to defeat the four. I think that Sora should be pushed back and almost defeated by Aqua who is stronger than him and has much more power because Ansem and Xemnas are still alive forcing him back but Dounld and Gooffy should come in and help him as Aqua throws Lea back into the force field she should turn her intention to the two animals aimed to destroy them for trying to help Sora escape. I think that Sora should climb up and together they should unleash a trinty attack that will throw Aqua back because of the bright light that comes off of it will injure her eyes. I think that As the four escape Aqua will know that they could be a treat and most stop them but first she will find Kairi and capture her. I think that Vanitas and Aqua should finish with the first experiments on Naomi and then move on to continue them. I think that Aqua should lead a hole bunch of heartless and nobodies to attack the mysterious tower and destroy it. I think that Mickey should be horrifed when he sees what Xehanort has done to Aqua and know that he and Kairi most stop the darkness once and for all.
| Visitor chapter 2 . 8/17/2013
Very interesting story :)
| dark nightmere chapter 2 . 8/17/2013
I think that Sora's demantion to escape should have incressed now that he's seen Aqua he should know the evil that Xehanort has done to people and know that he most of done somthing terrible to Aqua to make her give into darkness. I think that Ansem should become demantined to capture Kairi and claim her heart of pure light to get rid of another of the princess. I think that the orgenezation should have claimed five of the princess of light's hearts Alice, Anora, Cinderlla, Snow white and Bella. I think that Mickey should aim to protect Kairi from the darkness to stop them from claiming another one of the princess and put another thorn in ther plans he knows that dounld and Gooffy have been captered and are most likely gone but they severed they duty by saving him those twleve years ago. I think that Sora should save Dounld and Goofy and aim to escape the castle but be confronted by Aqua as he reaches the entrance hall where Roxas fought Saix in the games. I think that Riku should still have hope but know that his island has proboly been consumed by darkness now that kairi is gone but hoefully she is safe from the darkness and he can reunite with her later. I think that Sora should fight Aqua using the light agenist her darkness which will be really powerful she unleash such power dark magic commands that Sora will be thrwon backwards but get back up to continue the fight but know that he is no match for her but Dounld and Gooffy should come in and save him and help him to push Aqua back. I think that the four compaions should escape and head to radient garden where they intend to push the darkness back. I think that Vanitas should lead the orgenzation's attack on the Radient Garden along with Xaldin who will have commanded the heartless and Nobodies to destroy the resdenice of the Garden. I think that Sora and the party should arrive just in time to save most of the them and clash with Vanitas but Aqua should arrive with reinforcements and crush the rebellion with them as Sora and compeny only just escape the confrontion. I think that Riku should summon soul eater and escape the cell that Ansem has put him in and find Nomei and attempt to escape with her but be stopped by Ansem in twilights view who will recapture Nomei and knock Riku out and take them back to the cells to continue his experiments.
| DemonessOfDepartingSorrows chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Hey buddy! Sorry I took so long to review this... but you know, busy busy... anyway!
As I told you before, this is very good :) I think it flows nicely, and you're good at conveying emotions and character's thougts.
And the captures! They were very good! Just enough dark without going overboard. Something I forget if we talked about - Ventus. How much of him will be in the plot?
| dark nightmere chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
I think that Sora should begin to fight agenist the darkness to try and free all worlds saving dounld and gooffy from the darkness and trying to fight off the monesters of evil that live throughout the worlds. I think that Naomi should give birth soon and be killed by vanitas soon after the first four weeks. I think that Riku should slowly be corrpted by the darkness and fight Sora to claim power and help the darkness to crush all worlds. I think soon Aqua should come into this but now she will be completely consumed by the darkness as Xehanorts wife and second in command she should be just as evil as Xehanort with none of the oringnal light Aqua left she should be completely gone and only the darkness should remain within her. I think that king Mickey should come into this later he should have escaped the keyblade graveyard when aqua was kiddnapped and corrpted and have continued to lead the verius restenices agenist Xehanort and his forces. I think that Sora should escape the orgensation's castle after fighting off many heartless and nobodies with dounld and gooffy by his side they should fight on battling the darkness in verius worlds to reunite with the king and kairi and stop Xehanort once and for all. I think that Aqua should confront Sora soon and with her dark keyblade she should battle him to recapture him and bring him back to the orgensation. I think that Sora should defeat Aqua but cannot strike her down because he knows that the real Aqua was a warrior of light and would never do this. I think that from Sora's hastaion Aqua should force him back winning the battle but stand down because he put up a good fight agenist her allowing him to go but before she leaves she should tell him to give up his fight because he will never win.