Reviews for I Love You With Every Shattered Piece
TenableCape9819 chapter 33 . 12/31/2016
You should do an extra bonus chapter of all the other countries reacting to their relationship
Lunar Iris chapter 33 . 9/5/2016
I cannot believe it is over. Though, I like the ending. I think it is quite fitting for them. And, now they can be happy! This was a very long journey for them, you, and your readers. Many parts of it were completely agonizing. But I enjoyed it 100%.
Darkabyssoflove chapter 33 . 9/5/2016
Sooo i just got around to re-reading again it this morning. Looking back on everything, I never had any sympathy for Arthur. I always felt so bad for Alfred but felt like Arthur deserved everything bad that came his way. Francis annoyed me to a certain extent as well. It's probably because he was always there to comfort Arthur while I'm sitting here thinking "omg but he caused that shit". I know that these two are minor characters but i loved Romano and Ivan in this story. For some reason, i wasn't too fond of Mathew. I felt like he had the potential to be a better support system for Alfred and was hard on him. It's like he didn't have the experience with love to understand his brother's pain. That's why I liked Italy's talk with Alfred. I thought it was stupid for Francis to fuck Arthur in his vulnerable state even if he was "afraid" because of Arthur's persistence. That's probably something that made me not like him as much. I'm so conflicted after reading this all in one shot. I'm so happy that Alfred and Arthur ended up happily ever after but I still can't help but feel that Arthur really doesn't deserve Alfred. I'm a little biased since America is my favorite character but if the roles were reversed I'd feel the same, only to a lesser extent. I guess this goes to show how deep their emotions for each other ran. Hahaha I'm probably re-reading this in another 2 months.
AiriRoses chapter 33 . 9/1/2016
It's over! I'm actually relieved to get a conclusion, and I'm so happy you didn't put this on Haitus. I would say the biggest complaint was how long the conflict was and how it took 15 chapters for them to finally get back together. Pacing is good but I felt it was going slow. I was practically pounding my head against the desk desk from how frustrated I was from that. Other than that, the emotional roller coaster was real in this story. I felt plenty of emotions and I would reread the earlier sex scenes if I was ever aroused. You know how to write that porn though! I loved how you wrote the characters, from their colony days to modern time. It was also nice that Francis was always there to help them no matter how frustrating the two was. (Seriously, I would have kicked both of them in the balls if I was Francis) I give this story a 8/10 -
Darkabyssoflove chapter 33 . 9/1/2016
OMFG IT'S FUCKING OVER LIKE HOLY FUCKING SHIT! This was a truly amazing story. I'm definitely reading it over again. I just love how complex their relationship is. It was so interesting seeing every side of them through the various stages of their adult life (mainly Alfred of course). I don't think there are words in the english language to describe how much I love this story. You've done an amazing job with this. (:
StrawberryAvalanche007 chapter 33 . 9/1/2016
:') I'm so happy for them! I can't believe this is over. It's definitely been an emotional roller coaster, but I'm happy to have been on it. I'll be sure to PM you whenever something in real life makes me think of this. Thanks for a great story!
Stalirious chapter 33 . 8/31/2016
Sad it has to end, but I love the story.
StrawberryAvalanche007 chapter 32 . 8/30/2016
Yaaaaay Alfred gets to top. This is like when you're reading a good book and you start to realize that it's almost done. So sad :'(
jeejee12 chapter 32 . 8/27/2016
The next one the last chapter? 'Le gasp!' T-T I'm going to miss youuuuu! (Goes to my emo corner) But, I really enjoyed this fanfic and the way it twisted and turned me in the best ways.
AiriRoses chapter 32 . 8/27/2016
You know, this whole time I still couldn't imagine Arthur topping Alfred. I just knew knew it was happening, but I couldn't imagine it in my head for some odd reason.
Lunar Iris chapter 32 . 8/26/2016
Yes, yes, you always do this! *flails*

I had actually wondered if Alfred topping was going to happen, though I felt there was a reason that it hadn't. Glad I was right. Haha! I love Arthur, the proper gentleman in public and every bit the erotic ambassador in bed perfectly comfortable with discussing whatever. He barely paused at the switch of positions. I think that is my favorite part of this chapter.

Only one more chapter! *flails again*
Darkabyssoflove chapter 32 . 8/26/2016
Oh damn it's gonna end soon :'( but AHA I was betting myself that Alfred was going to top before the story ended... I'm sad to see it ending but I'm also happy because I've been waiting for it to be complete so I can reread it all over again!
Lunar Iris chapter 31 . 8/24/2016
Oh good there will be more! I'm so relieved.

Although, I kind of think Arthur and Alfred are a bit relieved now as well. I am, and I'm not, surprised that it took them so long do have sex again. Part of me thought that they would plan it out a bit, but with the two of them, it probably did have to be a spontaneous thing... or they would keep putting it off and chickening out about it. I figured they would need a bit of romancing first, I guess.
Lunar Iris chapter 30 . 8/24/2016

Finally! The moment I have been waiting for! I love this so much. My heart is in pieces too! I am so glad that they have finally spoken the truth.
Lunar Iris chapter 29 . 8/24/2016
I am so glad that you used that song for this chapter. It was great to have it in my head through the whole thing. I didn't even have to go play it for it to get stuck in my head, which it will be all day now; it's one of my favorites.

I wish I had found this update sooner! I've been itching to see what's happened next.

I love that Arthur left the meeting to do this, because he's all about responsibility/obligation. Usually. And, this would be a pretty big deal. And, I love even more that moment when he said Alfred's name. That seems like it really might have been the only thing that got him inside. Yay!

Is Alfred really going to make Arthur talk in the entry? I wish I didn't have to go to work right now! Ugh!
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