Reviews for Bad Day
princetongirl chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
loved it update soon
Green Eve chapter 1 . 10/28/2002
Good opening sequence, starting in the middle of the action-it is a good way to capture the reader. Nice way to play the details. I liked the fact that Rory was in a major grump, that was fun.

Good work & good luck with your writing.
lunatix988 chapter 1 . 8/24/2002
hey, wait! why is this over? you can make the sequel...