Reviews for The Baker's Noble Son
B Dizzy chapter 6 . 7/27
Very clever,very nice good job
insidejokepartyof1 chapter 6 . 4/21
ah a cinderfella type story. Though I enjoyed the spin with challenges for the suiter.
BikerChick101 chapter 6 . 1/8
This story was absolutley amazing!
I don't think I've ever had more fun reading a story before :D
I only wish that it was longer hehe
IllusionsOfBliss chapter 6 . 1/3
Clever storyline, definitely had the fairytale storytelling spot on. Good job!
YinKeket chapter 6 . 12/30/2014
poor Katniss thinking her one true love died but he's much alive and the one she has married. lol he almost drop the platter when he saw his wife. lol a challenge is given and i think she would want to her married life with Peeta. i am loving the clues more and more and what she does to get them. yay she figured out it was Peeta the whole time and her vow was met. lol on Peeta being so shy towards his wife, it's cute when they are under the blankets. oh yeah he still has that bread. lol win having the title within the story here. yay they have kids a girl and a boy and yes lots of Practice does help in the bed room. love this story a lot. keep up the good work and do your best.
YinKeket chapter 5 . 12/30/2014
my my having dirty thoughts have you, Peeta lol. yeah i can see that he can clear his mind by walking around. well said Peeta with that rhyme or whatever that is telling her he will wait until his marriage. oh she is has opened up about wanting her claim on Peeta, Katniss lost her friend Gale but happy he was gone and out of the way. hell yeah on Peeta giving more clues on who he is by cooking something. clever on not telling Katniss who made them. this is going to be fun. omg you play you knowing the answers super fast but acting like you don't know for a little while. hell yeah Peeta got the last one because he was the one who told that to her. *dancing around* not really she didn't break her vow. he's right there and most everyone knew he is the boy who is the baker's son.
YinKeket chapter 4 . 12/30/2014
win for him to only to sleep in his pants. yeah from a home which didn't have much to crazy clothes i can see why he picked pants to sleep in. lol Katniss saw him somewhat nude. i love it. yay Peeta and Katniss are talking. glad Peeta killed that monster who took Katniss' friend Peeta trying to show some clues about his past but i guess it didn't work. omg Peeta is the boy who was so called lost in the woods, but it was a lie, a huge lie. his stepmother is one piece of work. epic win Peeta won the second test and finally the last one. this is going to be good. i bet he would do a lot more to her than just kissing lol. oh my this game they got Peeta play at the feast, this is gong to be fun. he was smart to head towards Katniss' little sister, very clever. hell yeah Peeta is awesome like that to win the game. he's on fire.
YinKeket chapter 3 . 12/30/2014
awesome his first task was done and now for the other three to be done. go Peeta. lol Haymitch was the drunk man, that is funny. that is really cool Peeta a baker, the noble then to knight hood. well done for being himself and doing the right thing. lol wow Haymitch is Kattniss' uncle. whahahahahahaha Peeta has a think bread into front of the woman he loves. that is too funny. finally he remembers her as huntress and a princess is one in the same. lol the repayment of the gray hairs Haymitch got from Katniss. i can see and understand what Katniss is coming from of not loving someone so much and have so much pain. wow on the other males who tried to win her heart all failed. lol the "spear" comment. i think Peeta as a better "spear" than Cato whahahahahahaha. go Lord Finnick with enchanting words.
YinKeket chapter 2 . 12/30/2014
oh man his father died when he turned 18, poor thing. yay for him be coming strong and well muscle too. Baker's son who has muscle don't mess with him. good for Peeta saving the man who is drunk. oh three task to win her hand, well done Katniss doing such a thing to by time to find her lover. awesome he has a way in after the drunk man handed it to him. awesome he killed the evil beast and saved a gypsy girl. yay Rue is saved awesome. i love how this story coming along. Rue is going to make Peeta super handsome with some clothes i bet. oh dang the future telling how well he will be. i bet his father would be so proud of him. his stepmother can suffer for the cause she had laid upon Peeta all those years ago. yep by helping people and kindness can go a long way, for sure with Peeta. omg he had passed the test even Peeta didn't know what he was doing but what his gut told him. go Johanna being all bad ass and awesome. a fairy of the forest. epic win on the dual meaning of mounted. man i love Johanna. holy crap that he has a ton of money now and how he looks. before hand he wouldn't even step forth in that place.
YinKeket chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
well done on the start of the story of this 1st paragraph. awww he saw a little hunter girl with a horse who can sing, cute. awwww they Peeta offer his lunch and shared it. well we have a Cinderella story kinda of. poor Peeta not getting any help. father must be blind thinking this woman and her kids would help his son. oh how sad her father had died and her own mother is useless and her poor sister to look after. Peeta is smart to give his mother necklace as a gift and more so a token of love before his evil stepmother got her dirty hands on it. glad his father kept his son's story alive and not dismiss it.
Acacia Cottonwood chapter 6 . 12/13/2014
Really love your stories.
the scout chapter 6 . 12/6/2014
really Good i loved it 10/10
HUNGER FOR THE HUNGER GAMES chapter 6 . 9/8/2014
Ok this going amazing till you described this sick shit
Guest chapter 6 . 8/9/2014
Lovely fairtytale :)
Chocovian chapter 6 . 8/4/2014
This is the perfect fairy tale, I absolutely loved it!
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