|Reviews for Bittersweet|
| futurejelly chapter 2 . 2/18
Let me start out with saying that I really like this story and have already added it to my faves. The only thing that bothers me is that Logan's accent doesn't match with Canada. I live in the northern US and our accent is pretty much the same as a Canadian's. Sometimes I'll be picturing Hugh jackman in your story but the dialogue is really making that difficult. I know that's not the most important thing in a story, but it's often the little details like that which pull readers out. When I read it, the dialogue makes me think that Logan has a southern accent. "Darlin'" is not how northerners pronounce it. We almost always emphasize the "ing". I'm sorry for the long review, it's just bothers me!
Haha. I always think the best course of action in a story is just to describe the accent, but write it normally. That way the readers can visualize it for themselves. Other than that, steamy, sexy and well written. Thanks!
| Guest chapter 24 . 1/20
Are you going to write a sequel to this because you stoped at a good point but I can see more to the story and her controlling her powers more than just when she was stroking his neck. But love your story.
| Stunning Sunset chapter 24 . 11/30/2013
Makes you want to have a special someone in your life, too, with all that entails, both good and bad. Good job!
| austexfan chapter 24 . 11/13/2013
Great story! One of the best Logan and Marie Fics I've read. Definitely going on my favorites list!
| Guest chapter 24 . 10/30/2013
Wish you'd do an epilogue to this, where they have a baby. I bet that would shake up the mansion really nicely. (giggle)
| EmilieCW-DXfan0119 chapter 24 . 9/24/2013
WOW! Took me hours to read, but well worth it. It's a beautiful (and definitely HOT) story. Very well written and the characters are well developed. I like the fact that Marie's mutation was not solved or controlled as I've seen in many stories I've read. Somewhere in the middle of this story, I wondered how they would be able to be intimate physically and you came up with a good idea. This will definitely go in my "favorite stories" cause I'm pretty sure I'm gonna end up reading it again later. Great job! :)
| Lumichamomilla chapter 24 . 9/21/2013
Whew! Should have reviewed earlier, but just couldn't stop reading! Romantic, playful and very,very hot. Some great moments, the romance of the proposal and the snow filled night time wedding had me getting all misty eyed. And giving Logan all that self control, and all those opportunities to test it ... ( fans self)
Thanks for sharing :)
| elwren75 chapter 15 . 9/15/2013
Yay! Logan's back. And I need a fan. It's HOT in here!
| elwren75 chapter 14 . 9/15/2013
My stomach has dropped to my toes, and all I want to do is sob! Oh, what people do to protect each other-when telling the truth wouldn't really be any worse! Come back, Logan. COME BACK!
| elwren75 chapter 4 . 9/14/2013
I love it when they finally get smart!
| elwren75 chapter 2 . 9/14/2013
Wonderful chapter! I love the banter between the two of them and their affection for each other/ Even when they're a bit uncertain, they still protect each other. I love that Marie is just as protective of Logan as he is of her, an that Logan is just as turned on and confused be the UST as Marie is. Can't wait to see how this plays out.
| elwren75 chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
I just found this story and so far, I am very impressed. Logan and Marie's relationship is, indeed, complicated. It's always annoyed me that the movies just seemed to have swept it under the rug after such and interesting and promising beginning. I guess that's why we have fanfic. I am very interested to see where this goes and I'm almost glad it's already finished, so I don't have to wait for updates! You'll probably be getting a lot of reviews from me in the near future, but I'll try not to over-fill you inbox. Thanks for writing this. I always enjoy your stories and I'm glad I happened to come across this one when I just wanted a great Rogan story to get lost in!
| Addicted2ItAll chapter 18 . 9/11/2013
I love Father O'Riley. I knew a priest like that once, he was one of the sweetest men you ever knew. Sunday morning you would fine him in church, preaching simple teachings to the masses and Sunday afternoon he was in the pub, having a beer with the boys. He always seemed more round than he was tall and never turned anyone away.
| ChrissyR1979 chapter 24 . 8/16/2013
Absolutely brilliant story! Loved every steamy minute xx
| DarkMoon2222 chapter 24 . 7/5/2013
Oh my I loved it! I loved everything about it! Relly loved Scott and Logan going at it, You did them prefect in this