Reviews for Soledad
yellowis4happy chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
The detail in this chapter is wonderful, and I love the ferocity you've imbued in Sango at her brother's death. So many choose to ignore how intense her character actually is in favor of making her all gooey over Miroku 24/7.

Your ability to give us readers a sense of all the textures that the characters are experience, like the sponginess of the Shikon realm, is also just fantastic and refreshing. :]
Reni-Chan chapter 9 . 8/13/2010
Oh, Sango. You're so bad. That's just like her to just not tell him about that.

This was a wonderful fic, and a pleasure to read the whole way through. You kept Sesshoumaru in character the whole way through, which is difficult in a romance fic, and that's awesome in and of itself. I also was very happy with how you dealt with the Miroku situation. There are just too many fics for this pairing in which Sango's relationship with Miroku has to be violently torn asunder just so she can be with Sesshoumaru.

I was very pleasantly surprised with Sesshoumarus reaction to Sango's tears over Miroku. Quite like him. I think I would have been taken out of the story if he had been overly sentimental and comforting. You really have a good sense of his character.

I found Sango's narrative a very pleasant read. Sesshoumaru's as well, but I suppose the difference is just Sango's character. I was very interested throughout in how she would handle each situation she came up against. You dealt with two deep and shielded characters in a very interesting way. Fics like these reaffirm my love for this pairing.

I adored your interpretation of Sesshoumaru's past. It really made me feel for him as a character and I enjoyed how you stripped away his shields bit by bit without exposing too much of his soul at once.

All things considered,this was a very poignant and entertaining piece of writing and I look forward to reading more from you.
Melloyellowphase chapter 9 . 8/6/2010

loved it
Noah chapter 9 . 7/23/2010
You can't pull a carriage with multiple stallions. Stallions fight. And they're not good to ride either, unless you want a warhorse. They would have pulled the carriage with purebred mares.
christine chapter 9 . 1/4/2010
XDFX chapter 8 . 12/5/2009 or what?
xXxDarkestFairyxXx chapter 2 . 11/28/2009
Wow a side of seshoumaru ive never seen, and probably wud never see if nt for fanfics. god bless them , lool
Baitdcat chapter 9 . 9/9/2009
I never tire of reading this story over and over again. It's that good! I spotted it years ago and still look it up now and again. Thank you for a very well written and endearing story.
mmmloops chapter 9 . 8/10/2009
GREAT story.

GREAT writing.

RedThread chapter 9 . 7/27/2009
Loved it!

You made it work so well!

I can't wait to start on the Kagara/Kouga one doubt that one is just as good as this...


Celebwen Telcontar chapter 9 . 7/14/2009
Whatever happened with the King who was courting Sango?

I love the story!

FenixPhoenix chapter 9 . 5/22/2009
This is probably one of the best fic I've ever read in this site. The descriptions are exquisit and the character development is very believable. Kudos!
KyoxSakiFan chapter 9 . 3/15/2009
That was the most AMAZING InuYasha fanfiction I've ever read.

I simply adore this pairing! It's my ultimate favorite! Why?

Because it would have so much chemistry if they interacted more! They did interact in the manga, and I actually freaked out and saved every page.

Yeah. I'm pathetic.

Secondly, I loved the plot line! In fact, I just finished telling someone how amazing it was over e-mail. lol

Thirdly, you have wonderful spelling and grammar, unlike most of this site, which made your fic all the more enjoyable.

The best part?


I am so AMAZED with your characterization that I want to CRY and delete every fanfic I've ever written and rewrite them because they don't compare to yours.

Honestly, this is amazing. You need to thank someone on deviantart because they posted a link to your fanfic on their picture, which is how I came to be here in the first place. XD

Keep up the good work! I hope you write another story for this pairing soon!
IVIaedhros chapter 8 . 2/19/2009
Dr. Phil has nothing on this guy.
IVIaedhros chapter 7 . 2/19/2009
I got a few good chuckles out of Sessh's reaction. "This nonsense is contagious," indeed.
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