|Reviews for The Raven Haired and Brown Eyed Girl|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Don't listen such nasty reviews Keep writing
You are good autho
| Minato Namikaze chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
Oh totally amateur-ish... get rid of the stupid convos of you and characters. It's utterly annoying, no matter how much you think it's amusing. And totally, very cliche. Even words you use are very cliche. If you got offended, try to understand my point. Improve your grammar, I'm not saying it sucks and you know that, if...
| naori-chan chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
i like your writing style :3 can't wait for the next chappie.. more importantly, who is this raven-haired girl?