Did you give him wings? God, I hope you gave him wings...

I Shall Read On!

This. Is. Bloody. BRILLIANT!

You are an exceptional artist/genius for combining my three favorite movies, Sherlock, The Hobbit, and Beauty and The Beast.

I Shall Read On!

Very nice.

I love this! My character was so accurate!

I loved it, you are very talented to make these kind of stories, I really enjoyed it! ️️️

I cried so much I need moooore

Love it! But disappointed that Mrs. Hudson didn't say "I'm not your housekeeper, dear."

Thank you for this rendition of my favorite fairytale.

wow! i loved this! i thought it was great how well you blended the story of beauty and the beast with sherlock (and johnlock .). It was also great how you managed to use so many of the actual characters from sherlock (such as lord moran) and mix them in with the fairy tail. Now i kinda wish that the real sherlock was a dragon ;)
- adoring fan ;)

It was soo good

OMG IM CRYING!

That was wonderful, great job! :)

Only read ch.1 and i'm just like "JIM IS GASTON!" fangirling over here, because "aren't normal people just so adorable?"
But oh dear. My favorite Disney princesses story mixed with my favorite Consulting Detective and Army Doctor.
Because well. Because Fanfiction. lol

You're so amazing my dear, just BLOODY awesome indeed ! Oh god, you just kill me with your gorgeous story, You put in the same place my favorite cartoon and my favorite pairing so ... You're my GOD now ! Bless you and the queen ! It was a real pleasure reading you , so perfect ! Thanks for this pure moment of happiness ! Kiss you !

Hello,

I hope you're not completely heartbroken or offended if I'm honest and blunt- you did say you wanted feedback? Also i assume English isn't your first language so please don't be upset by what I'm saying-

This is not good. The story premise is very sweet but I stopped reading at chapter 4. You really need to work on your vocabulary, punctuation and grammar. Spelling is a little wobbly but mainly good. There is little to no description as to any of the scenes the story is set in so far.

May I suggest that you look at other works of fan fiction, think about paragraph structure, adequate dialogue, use of adjectives and characterisation. To be honest it seems like you've started off just describing what happens in the Disney version of beauty and the beast with John and Sherlocks names. This coupled with simple sentence structure makes the story seem extremely childish, simplistic and boring.

However- it's great that you're writing fan fiction and have imagination- may I suggest obtaining a beta, someone to read through your chapters and make corrections for you- if you are unable or unwilling to go through the effort yourself.