Reviews for Proof of Existence
Alterbliss chapter 23 . 4/1
Love this story! Please keep it up.
Jarvey chapter 23 . 3/6
It's still alive! :D
weak chapter 12 . 2/13
the beasts one weakness is that hes slow. YOUR xander just stood there and took the hits like a bitch after hes been training with buffy for weeks. BULLSHIT!
Battlesny chapter 3 . 2/6
I wanna say the bullet stuck in their brain would make it hard to think it control their body, but the not breathing thing never hurt them before.
Dr1zzy chapter 23 . 2/3
Good story so far update plz
Kerrain chapter 23 . 2/2
Great to see an update. Still now I'm going to be wondering what Angels trigger is. Thank You.
Child-of-God16 chapter 1 . 2/1
If you can see what's happening in the world today, since it's all over and the problems are only getting worse, just know that these are the end times; the days Jesus warned about. He gave us signs to look for which can be found in Matthew 24 in the bible and told us to watch. To not let these times come upon you unaware.

Understand that the rapture is at hand and can happen any moment. The day of the Lord is coming like a thief in the night and you do not want to be left behind.

When I reach out to people I encourage them to come out of this world and to seek the father in heaven while he may be found since 1 John 2:17 tells us in the word of god aka the bible:

"The world and its desires pass away, but whoever does the will of God lives forever."

A lot of popular anime, games, movies, books, music and etc is of the devil. You don't want to be indulging in something that has no place in the kingdom of God since it will only hinder your walk with Christ. 1 John 2:15-17 and James 4:4 is important to remember since we can't be holding hands with the world and Jesus. These holidays & traditions a lot of us were brought up on has nothing to do with our father in heaven, is of the world and is only a distraction; please don't get caught up with it.

Realize that fiction by definition is "invention or fabrication as opposed to fact" along with other definitions out there... and you want to be careful. I use to be a fanfic writer myself but I gave up a lot of things because a lot of it was related or connected to the world.

There is nothing wrong with writing... but when you're writing about worldly things or fabricating stuff, you're putting yourself in danger since we're to walk in truth. Liars won't inherit the kingdom of God so you want to make sure you're speaking truth at all times.

Jesus told us at John 14:23-24 that if you love him then you'd obey his teaching. He also says at John 14:15 that if you love him then to keep his commandments.

I'd get away from fan fiction altogether and focus on or build a relationship with Jesus Christ since it's very important but that's a decision you will have to make for yourself.

Just know that all the issues going on in the world has already been foretold in the bible.

If you are awake and aware to everything going on, then please: seek the father in heaven, repent of your sins, let go of this world and follow Jesus as mentioned at Matthew 10:37-38; everything we need to know is in the word of god so please read the bible for yourself. You don't want to be deceived since a lot of churches out there aren't doing what they should be doing.

Know that there isn't much time left but don't adopt the spirit of fear since greater is he that is in you than he who is in the world. You need faith since without it, it's impossible to please the father in heaven so never let the devil steal that or your peace. Just draw close to the father in heaven and he will draw close to you.

We've all fallen short so nobody is better than anybody and the heavenly father is very merciful. Just humble yourself, go to the father in prayer, confess your sins to him and repent. Mean what you say & repent (turn away or stop doing it) and he will forgive you.

Jehovah is the god of Abraham, Issac and Jacob but nobody comes to the father but through the son Jesus Christ so you want to accept and follow him since it's by his blood we're redeemed back to the father in heaven.

A great deception is coming along with the antichrist and you do not want to take the mark of the beast. It's a chip that goes in your right hand or forehead. You can read about this in Revelation. Do not take this Mark, worship the beast or his image cause if you do it will land you in hell. Stay strong in Jesus. Only he can save us and he is a lot closer than people realize so be ready at all times and keep the faith.
Guest chapter 23 . 2/1
Lol, so glad that you have updated. Love this story!
Bobboky chapter 23 . 2/1
Very nice
ShaiGar chapter 23 . 2/1
Do you also post this story on other forums?
Quathis chapter 23 . 2/1
Not a bad little weekend for group, though it looks like things are going to get messy soon with Drusilla making plans to mess up Xander and likely anyone that is around them. Until next time.
TheWickedTruth89 chapter 23 . 2/1
Great chapter, I can't wait to see more.
VizeerLord chapter 23 . 2/1
Love your take on Dru. Three parts Crazy, two parts Bitch, four parts innocent child, covered with Gifted Seer.

More please
Hiei-Uchiha chapter 22 . 7/29/2017
Great story, please continue!
xavierp chapter 22 . 7/29/2017
I just finished rereading this, can't believe that you don't have more reviews on this. I'm finding it really well written. Not too sure that I follow your reasoning with the curse: Willow's eyes went black and she was, seemingly, possessed while doing it. That was her first foray into black magics - the resurrection being the other biggy prior to Kingsman's Bluff. Remember, Black Eyed Willow shows she's doing the bad stuff. It did take 9 (I think) gypsies to complete the curse originally.

That may just be nit-picking though. I like that Xander wins some and loses some and the big things still happen, just differently. It gives me hope that Cordelia can be saved. I do like some Xander/Cordelia. I especially like the chat with Willow and Xander and about growing up - in the show it was a given that everyone *except* Xander could do new things but he had to remain the dork from season one even though he has had a few defining moments.

Please keep writing this.
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