Reviews for Displacement
melindaWRITER chapter 2 . 5/22/2013
I... "luv'd" it heh heh heh heh
really though, I did. If I had one bit of constructive criticism it would be to take more time to get to things. I know that probably makes no sense but sometimes things seem a bit sudden? Not out of place, like they totally belong there in the story, they just pop up out of nowhere. Maybe a little bit of build up, descriptions would fix that? Or it might just be me being crazy
phnxgrl chapter 2 . 5/22/2013
Interesting Chapter. I loved how Buffy is using Angel's digs as a respite. I loved how She showed Spike she really did love him. Please continue.
M chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
YAY MY BUFFY FIC. It's got lots of things I like in it such as: 1. Spike, 2. Dawn 3. GILLY oh and did I mention SPIKE.
While, I know you're going to kill me, I like that he died (I've been to scared to admit that before but this is anonymous so I have plausible deniability HA) I'm excited to see what would have happened if the series continued and SPIKEY was alive :D
phnxgrl chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
Interesting beginning the scooby gang survived the Hellmouth and Buffy had told Spike she loved him. Please continue.