|Reviews for Eros Magna|
| Silivrenelya chapter 10 . 3/10
I love, love love love LOVE your story. Yes, it's a Story because it's so much more than a mere fiction. You mixed everything I love and look for when i read. Overall the slow changes in the minds of the two characters. It's really something that i look for, the mental and physical development in the protagonists. And you're doing It SO well ! I didn't think that your story would please me This much but i must admit that, now, i am totally into It. You're a fantastic writer. Don't be afraid to express This talent and hide/choke It under your other works or studies, even if I am sure that you really want and love what you do of course ! (:
Anyway, that's It, i just wanted to honestly congratulate you for this amazing story, This atmosphere, these real feelings and emotions (i admit that i am not a big fan of inherent pov, but here, you just rocked it), and i reassure you : you didn't write any OOC at. All. It is perfect.
I am sure that you are gonna pass your exams and you will be fabulous in your job, because you show a huge invest in all you do and that's admirable.
I hope that there will be a next, take your time, just don't drop it, It would be such a waist..!
I wish you a beautiful day or night, and congrats again and thank you for making us evade ourselves and think a little more about feelings and connections between people thanks to your story.
Oh and, sorry for the few mistakes if there are (i know there are!), i am French (oui madame) ! Mouah !
| sparklybutterfly42 chapter 10 . 3/5
looking forward to more! this is great!
| Freez-DeathLiver chapter 8 . 3/2
XD "This ditch just got deeper than six feet."
| Freez-DeathLiver chapter 7 . 3/2
In your story, the Military Police are willing to sacrifice innocent people, and the lives of other solders, just to what? Get Eren under their fingernails? WOW, what assholes. Oh wait… They do that in the manga/anime too right?
| Freez-DeathLiver chapter 6 . 3/2
You always leave the last sentence of the chapter to be so amazing, i love it and it makes me smile!
| Freez-DeathLiver chapter 5 . 3/2
I want some Eren/Levi action! Please please please?
| Freez-DeathLiver chapter 3 . 3/2
There's no way Levi didn't get what Hanji was saying lol, or he's trying his hardest not to admit it to himself, lol.
| Freez-DeathLiver chapter 2 . 3/2
I really like the way you portray Levi and his emotions and thoughts, I feel like I wouldn't be able to do that like you can. I can almost never keep characters in character but you seem to be doing that well.
| Freez-DeathLiver chapter 1 . 3/2
Oh my! I like it so far, true on that last sentence in every way with Eren, eh?
| Za Great Prussia chapter 6 . 2/3
| AdDicTiOn chapter 10 . 2/2
Can't wait for the next chapter! Will wait patiently, so don't stress yourself and take all the time you need to prepare it! Love you; we all do. The story's coming along great, if I do say so myself. :D Good luck with the rest of it, and hope for more excitement along the way! : )
| AdDicTiOn chapter 2 . 1/31
Goddangnit, I really need to stop reading my way into tears again; with the elite recon corp dying (for the, idk, 6th dozenth time?!), People treating Eren like some sort of monster when HE'S NOT... and just plain emotional moments... *sigh* Still, I can't stop reading on... :')
| jellyd chapter 10 . 1/14
Please make me happy and update this! :)
| CheetahLover101 chapter 2 . 1/7
I like how you add the part with Eren letting the guy take out his anger at him, and how Levi snaps him out of it XD
| CheetahLover101 chapter 1 . 1/7
Hehe, I love how you ended the chapter, in my opinion, that's how you get people to keep reading! And you sure have my attention!