|Reviews for Our Happy Ending|
| Heartbreaker1937 chapter 1 . 8/8
Okay, I really like this, it accurately shows Toko's emotions and thoughts as well as Genocide Jill's. It's very well done.
(Also, it makes more sense it turns out this way than in what I had in mind of the story I would create.)
| MissYaoiFangirl0 chapter 1 . 7/22
AGHHH MY FEELS IN THIS ONE IT'S KILLING ME
I love this story so much. The characters are quite realistic, and the story is nicely paced. ((it makes you actually want to read more, unlike those cheesy, OOC stories))
AGHWWWWW FUKAWA I JUST WANNA HUG YOU AND SAY THAT EVERYTHING'S OKAY ・・(ノД) *sob sob*
| valentina's sorrows chapter 1 . 7/3
how FUCKING DARE U OMG
| Anon chapter 1 . 6/13
You made me cry dude
How could you do this to my feelings
It's 1:51 am how dare you
| Airihs chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
This is, by far, my favorite Danganronpa fanfic. I prefer the theory that Fukawa's simply taking the picture but the others wanted to include her in the photo. That aside, your story is canon-worthy.
The characterization is amazing; it's almost as if the creators of Danganronpa themselves wrote this. It is vey well executed, I can't say otherwise. The changes in POVs are appropriate and you managed to wrap up some unexplained things, such as the reason behind Fukawa's smell. The scenes, the events fit perfectly in the Danganronpa universe, unlike some fanfics that are so forced that they're unenjoyable. I must not be explaining myself well, but it's just so good. You did a terrific job.
| LheraWryts chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
MY FEELS :_:
| Shredder572 chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
This story is too heartbreaking. Too much feels. :(
| AA chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
Break my fucking heart, why don't you?
| hunterofcomedy chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
Ahhh, it's so sad! But I freaking love it!
Although I absolutely despise the bad ending, I always found it so intriguing because of two things:
1. Byakuya is freaking smiling!
2. Touko is freaking dead and there is no explanation for it!
Because of that, I was happy to read this amazing story!
You did an excellent job of keeping everyone in-character and really going for the meat of the story right away! It was actually wonderful to see Byakuya actually try to help Touko. He could have just ordered her to kill herself to protect him but instead he took the high road and decided to try and find a way to keep her alive. And it didn't feel OOC for him because at this point, he had completely given up on murdering anyone, even to save himself.
And that ending truly was one of the best I've ever seen! Sad and yet, it felt more than satisfying to see Byakuya actually behaving like a normal person. Plus it was funny that his son was the embodiment of his previous personality! Quite a clever switch!
Honestly, this was a great idea to take on and I'm very impressed! Keep up the great work and happy writing!
| BrandNewBlueShoes chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
That made me cry :c So sad... But great story anyways :))
But actually I think the official reason for that picture when you get the wrong ending is that Asahina gave birth to both Hagakure's and Naegi's child (remember when Hagakure told Naegi that there was a 20% chance that their children would have the same mother? Yeah, that would be Aoi.) And Fukawa died giving birth to Togami's child.
But anyways that was a very well written story! I Enjoyed reading it :)
| catsinsuits chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
I just can't
Why ARE YOU SO GOOD OF A WRITER?
this makes me sad.
i never finished playing the game but i know what happens
| PaloozaChu chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
T-this is.. ;_;
| Kit Lupin chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
Simply beautiful. I feel so sad for Fukawa and Togami...
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
That was so sad and beautifully written. I almost cried at that death scene, and I was laughing barely a second later at the "I'm only 30% sure it's mine" part.
Really, really well done. I almost gave up on this site as far as fanfiction goes, but you restored my faith in it. Keep up the good work!
| Box of Tomato Fairy chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
I know I saw somewhere that what had happened is that Fukawa isn't dead in the picture and Togami is holding a picture of her because she is the one who is taking the photo.
anyway, great story, excellently written. Th PoV was done nicely and I didn't see any immediate errors