Alright i really love naruto and hinata be friend already. But i hate hinata action when she saw villagers. Yes, she love naruto. Care about him. I mean 3 anbu can't stop the villagers and what can a little girl do? if she was smart then she would have gone straight to the Hokage instead of meeting Naruto. Even when she's there hse can't do anything, right? I'd say she's stupid

URGHHHHHHHHHH

Looking forward to Chapter 9.

Good story, hope you can come back to this story someday.

Okay, so I'm not sure if you'd ever see this, but you have to put some more thought into your world building. You can't throw situations into the story without thinking about their consequences.

Here's what I mean.

1. You have Naruto becoming stronger and faster, as well as a hidden cottage outside Konoha, yet he's in the village when he knows there's a mob out for him. That alone is so stupid, that it almost made me stop reading. But it gets wore.

2. You have 3 ANBU protecting a stronger Naruto, yet they were out maneuvered by a bunch of civilians. That's... so insanely stupid that I can't even wrap my head around it.

Even if the ANBU can't use force against the civilians

(which is an extremely wierd take given that, a) a bunch if civilians are attacking another civilian, which I assume is a crime, and b) the civilians are interfering with the mission given by the Sandaima himself. That alone, is enough grounds to use deadly force), they could scare them off with jist KI.
I mean, it's what the Sandaime eventually did.)

3. You tried to fix this massive plothole by saying there were Ninja in the crowd, which is even more stupid. Ninja in the crowd means that ANBU could retaliate, and which would definitely have scared of civilians.

4. Ignoring all of that, all the ANBU needed to do was whisk Naruto away and prevent the situation from ever happening.

These are four MASSIVE plotholes that you ignored, just to make Naruto and Hinata get closer. It makes zero sense and just makes the story all the more unrealistic.

What you could have done, is to introduce a single target. Perhaps a smart Chunin or Jounin who has a grudge againat Naruto for some reason, maybe the Kyuubi killed his family or something.

Have him plan his revenge for a number of years, cause a diversion to distract the ANBU, have him trail Naruto to his hideout, or knock him out during the day. Then have Naruto leave a trail or clue for Hinata, (a reversal of Minato rescuing Kushina), so Hinata can find her courage, and eventually defeat the chunin/Jounin together with Naruto. That alone will give her more confidence and make Naruto trust her.

See, now this is a believable scenario that's relatable and has real depth.

Not the caricatures you have in this chapter

Looking forward to 9.

I actually like this one. And I hope it continues

Why did he even return to the village? Just camp out for the night

Awesome!

No thanks. You ruined it for me. Hiashi doesn’t deserve his children and should be executed for being the cold hearted bastard he is. You should be drawn and quartered for listening to your readers to change the story. That never ever ends well. Reader suggestions almost always fuck up the story. You could have chosen other ways other than destroying the fluffy and making them miserable. So go fuck yourself for the idiotic moron you are who chose to listen to retards.

You made the Abby fucking pathetic and weak. One ninja alone could have handled a crowd of civilians. Three of the hokages personal body guards? Wow you made a really shitty decision. It would have been better to have them stand there disobeying the hokage to see the demon beat then to have them go down like pussies. I’ve lost respect for you and this story is garbage now.

Aw..sad.. naruto and hinata are not in the same team... sakura and sasuke are not my favorite cause of how they treat naruto. And not a fan of sakura.. i dont know why..

Good Please come back and continue the story

Ottimo il tets si fa interresante

Grande lavoro complimenti!