|Reviews for When You Turn Black|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/25
| NaLuFireSpirit chapter 1 . 5/26/2016
Great story are you going to add more about what happens after she grabbed his hand I loved your story!
| Auf Wiedersehen chapter 1 . 2/13/2016
my god, graphic...
| Moon Stone Tiger Lily chapter 1 . 1/16/2016
oh... my. that was certainly violent, but in a twisted way oddly romantic...
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
I honestly love how satisfying the ending to this ending is. I also love how Natsu was telling Lucy to close her eyes so she couldn't watch him become a 'monster'. This one shot was sweet in a dark and gory way and so fulfilling that I absolutely adore it
| shigemi-chan chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
i like it
| Twishadowhunter chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
| Mille XD chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
This is so dark but I really really love it
| FutureMage chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
Every time I read it, it just gets better and better. Thank you for your creativity! I love this story!
| FutureMage chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
I would love to go on about how amazing that story is and write a whole essay but I am to lazy. So will at least say a few things. One, best one-shot I have ever read. And two, where did you come up with that because it was truly amazing and beautiful and down right the most romantic scene I like all of Fairy Tail centered around Natsu and Lucy. Thank you so much for that story. It makes my day every time I read it. It will forever be remembered by me.
| AnimexFreakz 0.o chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
YAY! He got what he deserved! Go NaLu! Thanks for writing!
| Demon-Art-Lover1 chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
wow. just wow 0.o still good though
| GoldenRoseTanya chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
I dont feel afraid of Natsu at all.. That was perfect I would want someone to do that for me if i was in Lucy's place... yeah I am a sadistic bitch soo what?XD
| milk ghost chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
I...you...WOW. It was gory, but beautiful at the same time. Oh my...I never thought I'd be putting those two things together...but lovely job, Paradise-chan!