Awesome, chapter.! Looking forward to future updates.

Bro actualiza Shinobi en alta mar ese es muy bueno

Great new chapter! However, I must say I still have misgivings on the NarutoxTayuya pairing you seem intent on. Though admittedly that's because I'm such a staunch Hinata loyalist. That said, I really liked the fight scene you wrote, both between the Alpha clan shinobi & the 4-tails, and even more so between Darui/C & Itachi. Which I must admit is a VERY interesting fight to speculate on.

As for your author's note at the end, I ONE-HUNDRED percent agree w/ your fanfiction philosophy. It's why I tend to favor writing fanfiction that is focused on empowering secondary/side characters that people otherwise accept as useless. Utilizing canon lore of course. As I've always said over the years, the key rule of thumb for writing fanfiction should ALWAYS be to write for yourself, first & foremost.

If people who read it like it, cool. If they don't, also cool. As long as you're satisfied w/ the product.

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Never Put your faith in the man. But in GOD.

Romans 8:1-11 ESV
[1] There is therefore now no condemnation for those who are in Christ Jesus. [2] For the law of the Spirit of life has set you free in Christ Jesus from the law of sin and death. [3] For God has done what the law, weakened by the flesh, could not do. By sending his own Son in the likeness of sinful flesh and for sin, he condemned sin in the flesh, [4] in order that the righteous requirement of the law might be fulfilled in us, who walk not according to the flesh but according to the Spirit. [5] For those who live according to the flesh set their minds on the things of the flesh, but those who live according to the Spirit set their minds on the things of the Spirit. [6] For to set the mind on the flesh is death, but to set the mind on the Spirit is life and peace. [7] For the mind that is set on the flesh is hostile to God, for it does not submit to God’s law; indeed, it cannot. [8] Those who are in the flesh cannot please God. [9] You, however, are not in the flesh but in the Spirit, if in fact the Spirit of God dwells in you. Anyone who does not have the Spirit of Christ does not belong to him. [10] But if Christ is in you, although the body is dead because of sin, the Spirit is life because of righteousness. [11] If the Spirit of him who raised Jesus from the dead dwells in you, he who raised Christ Jesus from the dead will also give life to your mortal bodies through his Spirit who dwells in you.

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Philippians 2:1-11 NASB2020
[1] Therefore if there is any encouragement in Christ, if any consolation of love, if any fellowship of the Spirit, if any affection and compassion, [2] make my joy complete by being of the same mind, maintaining the same love, united in spirit, intent on one purpose. [3] Do nothing from selfishness or empty conceit, but with humility consider one another as more important than yourselves; [4] do not merely look out for your own personal interests, but also for the interests of others. [5] Have this attitude in yourselves which was also in Christ Jesus, [6] who, as He already existed in the form of God, did not consider equality with God something to be grasped, [7] but emptied Himself by taking the form of a bond-servant and being born in the likeness of men. [8] And being found in appearance as a man, He humbled Himself by becoming obedient to the point of death: death on a cross. [9] For this reason also God highly exalted Him, and bestowed on Him the name which is above every name, [10] so that at the name of Jesus every knee will bow, of those who are in heaven and on earth and under the earth, [11] and that every tongue will confess that Jesus Christ is Lord, to the glory of God the Father.

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II get what you're 's is nothing wrong with power as long as it is done properly... and this is a fan fiction so you could create your own power scaling system.

For Example Jiruyia In a One on One Fight Stands No Chance against Nagato without Help...Even of Orcahmaruband Tsunade Help him..

But there is an issue in this story Nagato in Canon was Crippled...But in this Story Nagato is at his Prime..regardless Minato Would Easily Scale To Him..Minato In canon Died Young..But in this Story Minato Is much more experienced and Older and Complete Sage mode..

I believe Minato Is more than equipped to handle Nagato.. Because he's not only the fastest Shinobi but He Has Flying Thunder God...He Hard counter his techniques and speed blitz Nagato...And Even if Someone Seal Minato or Put him in Dimesion..He Could Use His signature jutsu To Teleport Out

Minato Is Powerful and Has a lot of ridiculous Hax on his side and has Sage Modre.. His true strength comes from making the most out of his intelligence and Everything he learned...Even

Don’t jashinist seems to be a religion derived from a religion in real world starting and ending with M. Known as musl

Seriously, make a patreon account. I'd pay some good money(and, undoubtedly, many more would) for you to write at least a quarter as much as you used to.

I swear I read this fic in under two weeks. Even if its only the second Naruto fic I read, its by far the Best. The fight scenes are described very well and you can easily see them in your head. Hope it receives even more updates in the future!

I do listen to your comments (lol)... do you know how long I've been following this fanfic? S long mehn please, next chapter shouldn't be in another year I know it's for your amusement; but consider we your loyal fans

This is one of the the best Naruto fanfiction i have read, and i read a lot. So, please keep going and finish it .
Thanks for the hard work kenechi.

Time skip let’s go baby

I think the power levels are

1 obito

2 minato

3 nagato

Obito hiding his power makes sens i was like why is he so avrage