|Reviews for Gatekeepers: Rise of the Overlords|
| Krocken the Hybrid chapter 4 . 1/12
Very god, like always
| DarkDreamers chapter 3 . 12/12/2013
We are working hard on Chapter three just so you know, also we might be planning a Christmas Special for you all to read
| Cataclyptic chapter 3 . 9/15/2013
Don't forget to introduce each character carefully. Without context, no one will know which series these guys are from, or if they are important in any way.
So far it's looking good, but it's hard to tell what's happening: this chapter just threw loads of characters to join the "team" and that seems to be about it... Although the keyblade thing was done well,
But I have two warnings for you: 1) The whole "devil and angel in the same weapon" thing has been done a billion times, so you'd better bring something new to the table, or twist it up in a new way. 2) I have personal experience with this one: do not make your cast of main characters too large. lPKMN nearly suffered big time because of this one fact, and even now I struggle to write in my eight membered cast.
| Krocken the Hybrid chapter 2 . 8/4/2013
As, poor guys, in hot water already
| Krocken chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Good start so far