Reviews for When First I Saw You
Lerrinus chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Yay! Very good story, just the right amount of humour, great work with the dialogue, all personalities nicely nailed, good ending! (hairy noodles? *shiver*)
Ayjah chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
I love the use of Paris' knowledge of the past, the use of something OTHER THAN pregnancy to weave a wonderful story :)
Alitta Dax chapter 1 . 12/3/2002
Very good, and intresting, I liked it. Athour- continue yo develop your own stlye, find what feels right to you, and go for it!

Alitta Dax

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shadowwolf2371 chapter 1 . 9/21/2002
i loved the story.
Mini Captian Janeway chapter 1 . 8/26/2002
Good story!
Altra Palantir chapter 1 . 8/25/2002
Awww! I like this! this is really cute! I've read a lot of your other stories, but this is the first serious one (that i've seen.) You should write more.