Thank you for skipping Foxy.

So quick question are you going to incorporate the revelation of Luffys devil fruit actually being a zoan. Cause I was thinking ASL having all three devil fruit categories and depending what you do with that news. Would then play into wich category you pick for Sabo. So for example if you incorporated Luffy devil fruit new status, you could make Sabo a special paramecia like Katakuri.

I don't understand why people would just now start complaining about the sword. when you've made it pretty clear it's not his main weapon, just fun side thing.

I kinda hope for Boa. Look if I enjoy the plot I'll read most ships, but I'm not always a fan of shipping Luffy with any of the strawhats.

love how you incorporated, your experience into the story.

Love this already

This is completely unfair, but I just can't stand the idea of Luffy with a blade.

this is actually boring and pretty bad

im really enjoying your take on this. We still get the Goofy luffy we all know and love yet with a darker more mature side. i also love how he interacts with others.

not gonna lie if i had been around when Nami asked the gay question i would have put something smartass in like maybe hes just not attractive to her lol.

cant wait to see your take on Sabaody, Impel Down and Marineford .. and will he have his Nakama with him to save Ace or will he send them off to be trained even more

love your work

love your work i actully listen to it on youtube before but reading it is so much better after i read it all i plan on reading more of your work

I was just reading the reviews and i genuinely feel terrible. I don't know if you wil read this seeing as it's been over a decade but if you do, please don't get downhearted or anything. Your story's amazing, more so considering how little time you had. It's probably useless asking for an update, but if you ever one day decide to, I will support you and still read 3 Hope you're doing good!

just fuck off with this story...

stupid, decide if he is op or not, having luffy keep going on in the story about how becomming pirate king with his str will be easy, then you come around in the AN claiming it wont be easy... just make him op and deal with that ,or dont make him op and then make him look weak for stupid reasons.

I saw someone comment on this so just to make it clear, HE DID write 61 chapters in 3 months, used to update 3-4 times a day, it's not a glitch can't believe it's been almost 11 years, will always have fond memories of this fanfic