Reviews for What We Lose (is part of us)
hawk1989 chapter 14 . 8/18/2016
So good! Simply amazingly good! I love the way you've written the story and the mix between angst and humor (I laughed so hard during McCoy's and Spok's conversation over the tribble's "custody". Loved that!) But what I like most about your story is the amazing way you convey Kirk's inner turmoil, how he copes with each loss, with the destruction and his death. Also, the way he interacts with his friends. Now I never cry when I read a story, but the part where Kirk reflects that Pike is gone and won't "give him a smile anymore", I actually spilled a tear or two.
So once again, amazingly written story! Keep updating (asap) and when you're done with this story, write another one. I deeply encourage you!
defiant-galaxy chapter 14 . 4/15/2016
Agh I love this! Awesome characterisation. I don't what else to say a part from good job!
Genibane chapter 14 . 4/10/2016
This was really good. I would love to see more chapters!
Guest chapter 14 . 12/4/2015
Awesome story. I enjoyed it very much. The quality of the writing made it a delight.
chocolatelover1 chapter 14 . 6/12/2015
Oh gosh, this fic is amazing! I love your characterizations, they're all perfect! Seriously. Your Spock is spot on! He's logical and all that, while still being kinda emotional and sincere (if that makes sense) and I think that's awesome! Your writing is wonderful and you're able to so clearly... describe? (not the best word to explain it but that damn word is eluding me!) their emotions to the reader and its simply great. Cant wait for more, hope you plan on updating!
Guest chapter 14 . 9/15/2014
Great story! I'm really intrigued by the potential storyline re: Kirk serving on other vessels. Please continue updating the story.
Clara Brighet chapter 14 . 8/8/2014
This was amazing. Just - this whole thing was amazing. Beautifully written, and so, so satisfying. You made me laugh, you made me cry; I thought my heart would burst from bittersweet joy, or else melt into a puddle. It was wonderful.
Your writing is terrific. I LOVED this line from the (perfect) scene between Jim and Bones: "When things fall to pieces and people are left to deal with the twisted aftermath of their own crucibles, there's still forgiveness. And maybe that's enough."
Beautiful. Poetic. Powerful.
Thank you so much for writing! I have enjoyed it immensely. :D
- Clara Brighet
Gracealma chapter 14 . 8/7/2014
Spock is so right that grief is endurable when shared. Like your plot line and characterization.
Clara Brighet chapter 5 . 8/7/2014
I'm crying. Good job, you made me cry.
Ohh those sneaky Admirals, 'visiting' while McCoy is away. :(
I wonder what Bones is going to have to say about all this? ;D
Thank you for writing!
- Clara Brighet
Clara Brighet chapter 4 . 8/7/2014
Ahhh this is so good! Of course they couldn't put ALL this recovery stuff in the movie, but still, I missed it. I am having so much fun reading this! You have a lot of great ideas. Like the debriefing. I totally didn't think of that, but it would've had to have happened eventually. So excited for chapter 5!
Thank you for writing!
- Clara Brighet
Clara Brighet chapter 3 . 8/7/2014
I liked that scene better than the one in the movie! That is how I shall remember it from now on. :)
Thank you for writing!
- Clara Brighet
Clara Brighet chapter 2 . 8/7/2014
Oh that was amazing. I thought it was great how uiu used Spock's entry into the acting captain's log to tell part of the story. I also loved the second half of the chapter. :D
Thank you for writing!
- Clara Brighet
Clara Brighet chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
This is awesome. Thank you so much for filling in those potential-full gaps! I just watched the movie for the first time, and I was dying to know what happened in the sickbay. This is really good so far!
Thank you for writing!
- Clara Brighet
MamzelleHermy chapter 14 . 7/28/2014
I am loving this story! It is absolutely brillant! I hope you'll keep on writing it!
lanteaddicted chapter 14 . 7/19/2014
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