Reviews for Smorgasbord
slc6548 chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
OMG that caused seriously uncontrollable laughter and maybe a few snorts!
romycullen chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
omg haha Edwrad is adorable and hot!

and the last line Bella says... OMFG
poor Andy XD
dreampills chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
um freaking awesomeness
Edlovesme chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
This was great. I read it over on the LDA blog, good job. Loved the ending.
Rita01tx chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
That was a ton of fun! Absolutely adored your geeky Edward and self-confident Bella...and Andy, of course! Just let him have the damn caterpillar thing LOL!
My Friend Alice chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
Ha Ha! Such a funny, well written story!
reader83 chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
That. Was, awesome! Funny when it needed to be and oh so hot! ;)
Hadley Hemingway chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
Now THAT makes me think harder (pun intended) about this whole topic...maybe the Mr should read this! Love the clumsiness of Edward, the assertiveness of B (nice role switch), and the actual romance, love, and thoughtfulness throughout. You've done a great job here ;). Haven't read them all yet, but this is my favorite entry so far!
tsm0836 chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
This just made me giggle, loved the last line.
CrCullenZ chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
you should totally make this into a fanfic room story, not just a one-shot! I love Edward and Bella in your story!
cherryhilz chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
That was fun! Sexy and sweet! :)
zazasant chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Funny and sweet and sexy! No faults! ;-)
Sophiepicklegirl chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Lol. Fabulous twist at the end. Poor pussy (cat!)
shehazi chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Don't be shy about it Cris! Be loud and proud . It was a damn fine bit if fun. And that wasnine damn fine shygeekbuthotunbedward.
MmmmMmmmmm
LouLouCullen chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
That was awesome! That has to be the best one shot, I've ever read! Loved it!
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