|Reviews for The Price of Peace|
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/8
At least its not one of those 100,000 narusasu yioi fic it disgusts me every time i search naruto fic ...but the worste ones are those fuck mpreg shit
| ShadowDeath911 chapter 23 . 3/1
| ramadi.riswanto chapter 23 . 2/19
Is this still further fanfic?
I am very happy with this fanfic.'_')b
| Last true Naruto fan chapter 20 . 2/14
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/2
| Guest chapter 23 . 1/2
| 21 chapter 3 . 1/2
please update soon . Your story is really really good
| TheTureBardock chapter 23 . 11/19/2016
FINISH THIS STORY! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED
| Dkadarkness chapter 23 . 10/21/2016
Still waiting for the update
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/12/2016
please update soon
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2016
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| Guest chapter 13 . 2/22/2016
You don't need lemons in your story it's disrespectful to the characters that you're writing about as well as the actors who voiced the characters but if you want to write fluff then that's okay but has to be done tastefully and on top of that if your other fans complain tell them to go rent Naruto porn parody &grow up and get a life in the process what your story
| Reality check chapter 12 . 1/26/2016
No lemons just fluff that's all you need when do that you. you disrespected the characters you write about in the show call me old school but I don't think it's necessary to write about it I'm sorry if you might think that but think about it you want to be a good writer you don't need to write that to make a good story you have to trust me on this how often constructive feedback that's why I'm saying that but you have to trust me on this is not necessary please believe me when I say that love is all you really need even if you already complete the story I wrote it for future reference just try to keep that in mind when you write and future stories because when you do that you can mean two couches and you disrespect the show that you're writing about I have no doubt that you could be a great writer if you just thought about how about your stories so like I said I do like the story I just want you to think about this for future stories you have a nice afternoon
| Vaanarash chapter 23 . 12/13/2015
Very good story over all. There's some spelling errors here and there, and some parts where it feels like you decided to reword or rewrite something without deleting what had been there previously but the plot makes up for it to me.
I actually quite like Hanabi/Naruto stories, whether serious or comedy, in part because there are so few of them. I dislike Hinata/Naruto for much the same reason. Too many of them, often with similar if not identical plots.
I particularly enjoyed how much grey there is instead of black and white in regards to the characters motivations.
The only three pieces I can honestly say bug me/I dislike are Naruto continuing to act like an idiot when it upsets him that people keep treating him like an idiot because he acts like an idiot when it upsets him that people keep treating him like an idiot...a vicious cycle. #2 is Darui acting like he doesn't want to hurt Hinata when he knows that he is essentially kidnapping her in order to rape/have her raped and he doesn't seem to have the slightest moral problem with that. Finally, Sakuma arranged to have his agent (who is presumably a Hyuuga) take the Fire Daimyo's granddaughter hostage? How would having all of Hi no Kuni turn on Konoha benefit Sakuma in the slightest? These are the guys that were fully willing to punish Konoha because Naruto was in another country when they decided they wanted to have him at a birthday party at the last minute. Why in the world would Sakuma think that was a good idea?
Here's hoping you come back to this story and start updating again.
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/15/2015
Disgusting. Fox semen! ugh