|Reviews for The Price of Peace|
| Dkadarkness chapter 23 . 10/21
Still waiting for the update
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/12
please update soon
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/11
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| Guest chapter 13 . 2/22
You don't need lemons in your story it's disrespectful to the characters that you're writing about as well as the actors who voiced the characters but if you want to write fluff then that's okay but has to be done tastefully and on top of that if your other fans complain tell them to go rent Naruto porn parody &grow up and get a life in the process what your story
| Reality check chapter 12 . 1/26
No lemons just fluff that's all you need when do that you. you disrespected the characters you write about in the show call me old school but I don't think it's necessary to write about it I'm sorry if you might think that but think about it you want to be a good writer you don't need to write that to make a good story you have to trust me on this how often constructive feedback that's why I'm saying that but you have to trust me on this is not necessary please believe me when I say that love is all you really need even if you already complete the story I wrote it for future reference just try to keep that in mind when you write and future stories because when you do that you can mean two couches and you disrespect the show that you're writing about I have no doubt that you could be a great writer if you just thought about how about your stories so like I said I do like the story I just want you to think about this for future stories you have a nice afternoon
| Vaanarash chapter 23 . 12/13/2015
Very good story over all. There's some spelling errors here and there, and some parts where it feels like you decided to reword or rewrite something without deleting what had been there previously but the plot makes up for it to me.
I actually quite like Hanabi/Naruto stories, whether serious or comedy, in part because there are so few of them. I dislike Hinata/Naruto for much the same reason. Too many of them, often with similar if not identical plots.
I particularly enjoyed how much grey there is instead of black and white in regards to the characters motivations.
The only three pieces I can honestly say bug me/I dislike are Naruto continuing to act like an idiot when it upsets him that people keep treating him like an idiot because he acts like an idiot when it upsets him that people keep treating him like an idiot...a vicious cycle. #2 is Darui acting like he doesn't want to hurt Hinata when he knows that he is essentially kidnapping her in order to rape/have her raped and he doesn't seem to have the slightest moral problem with that. Finally, Sakuma arranged to have his agent (who is presumably a Hyuuga) take the Fire Daimyo's granddaughter hostage? How would having all of Hi no Kuni turn on Konoha benefit Sakuma in the slightest? These are the guys that were fully willing to punish Konoha because Naruto was in another country when they decided they wanted to have him at a birthday party at the last minute. Why in the world would Sakuma think that was a good idea?
Here's hoping you come back to this story and start updating again.
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/15/2015
Disgusting. Fox semen! ugh
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/15/2015
Oh god. Please, don't make the fucking uchiha equal to Naruto. that is so fucking lame, almost like cannon where everytime naruto got one epic jutsu, and that stupid Uchiha got five in a manner of speaking,
| guess chapter 3 . 10/15/2015
I find it interesting that you made it Naruto x Hanabi. The only thing I have a problem with is how you described Sasuke. You said or Karin said that he is in league of Madara and Hazirama. I find that bullshit. Take away his eyes and he is nothing. It is clearly that karin sees him as nothing more than a god, and you tried to follow cannon in making him stronger while he have actually a low chakra reservate. Actually no skills at all as he relied a lot on his sharingan.
Then about naruto. His training and life was stunted a lot. And I think that he far exceed Sasuke or anyone else without using Senjutsu or Kurama powers. I will see how far you take this.
| kyuzo3567 chapter 23 . 10/16/2015
Damn you for not updating this or your profile in over 2 years. This is easily the best Hanabi story I've read and one of the best Naruto stories I've read on here as well. Can we at least get an update on if you are alive or not? You were at least a year ago based on the most recent story in your favourites list
| Cenright chapter 23 . 8/16/2015
It is too bad that you don't seem to be continuing this. It is such a different style from other stories, and seems to be coming together very well.
| harblack chapter 23 . 8/13/2015
Real pity this story hasn't been updated in so long. Great intrigue and overall plot, interesting characters and about the only 'Naruto gets revenge on Konoha' story I can think of reading where the characters are even remotely fleshed out. Hope to one day see you return to this story
| tanzar81 chapter 9 . 8/8/2015
Do the voices in your head talk to each other...
| toofine89 chapter 23 . 8/2/2015
Excellent story! Good plot, good original abilities, and a well done continuation of canon. The worst thing is easily how one-sided and bigoted the nobles are. I get it, but it is the most cliche thing in your story. All the other characters, however, are excellent. They are well described with realistic motivations and a deeper level of connection to them than other authors are capable of writing. I hope to one day see more.
| Sasame dragneel chapter 23 . 7/23/2015
What no more chapters
How its been 23 chapters since i started reading a couple of months ago