Nice story! Thx for writing! Hope you somewhen will return to it.

Naruto Uzumaki bisexual moment

I don’t know what’s going on with Orochimaru but I m liking it

Paperwork awesomeness!

What you said about pronouncing ō like in “on” is incorrect. That is a short o sound and Japanese, as far as I know, does not have that sound. It is pronounced like the o in “own”, ironically what you said it is not.

But, Iruka-sensei! Team Seven is a two-man team! They don’t have a third member. Just a spectator tagging along.

When I first watched Naruto and Mizuki did the kyuubi reveal, I thought he was too stupid to live for purposely cornering a demon god thing and pissing it off.

Well having started the story thinking it was just a crackfic I must say this is so much more than just a crackfic. Would be nice if you updated but doesn't seem likely, anyway cool story byeeee

Oh damn, itchai showing up that early? Surprising

Holy shit. You updated (a while ago, apparently, whoops. I thought I had this subscribed)
This was great. You have an excellent way of maintaining interest with your cliffhangers

If he knew he was the Jinchuuriki, why did he ask why Mizuki targeted him? Shouldn't it be obvious? And if the Kyubey is known for chakra control, why could he "barely conjure up a clone on a good day"?

why is naruto still sakura the usless banshee's punching bag?

I know it’s been a while, but I do hope you continue this. Even though I’m not involved with rationality stuff anymore, I still enjoyed and appreciated this story, and the creative things you came up with.

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Wow, Sacura is obnoxious. Guess you could make a case for two dimensional, if you added "delusional"...