Reviews for Lighting Up the Dark
Guest chapter 20 . 7/5
"I'll be good!"

OOC, SoD broken.
Red Cross Uzumaki chapter 1 . 5/9
I didn't feel like cheating if someone corrected you but it's Kyuubi not the way you say ninetails
Puns chapter 25 . 5/3
Did Naruto make a reference to Bleach and PMMM? Ichigo stabbed a magical katana into his heart and Madoka made a contract with Kyubey. Nice one, even tho this is 3 years too late.
Kingkong101 chapter 17 . 4/7
Smart but bitch naruto
Addles28 chapter 26 . 4/6
Good but is it Dead ?
Animekitty47 chapter 26 . 4/2
Having discovered this story after rereading HPMOR, and seeing how long it's been since this story got an update I was going to make a plea for- it's assuming you still had any interest in it. Happily, I read the notes on your page first, and saw you never really did lose interest in it, and are close(ish) to more chapters of this story.

A roughly 3 year hiatus isn't as bad as some others I've seen. In March, one author returned after 7 years. And another author once had a 12 year hiatus before finally completing the story. Twelve years. Good thing you'll be back sooner than that. :D

Shikamaru is excellent, Hinata is beautiful, and I'm glad this isn't the end for these characters after all, whenever you do end up ready to begin posting again. Shame that last paragraph on Sasuke's training is doomed to remain a noodle incident.

See you sooner or later!
Lucasnox chapter 26 . 3/24
Technically the author did avoid a year long hiatus

Since more than two years is technically not a year long hiatus
Lucasnox chapter 20 . 3/12
Poor rock lee, hopefully he can ACTUALLY be her freind and get over his crush rather than just painfully pine after her with a cruel hope that itd be something more

Good friendship is usually more rewarding than early crushes anyway, shipping is best when its FRIENDSHIPPING
Adamant39 chapter 26 . 2/10
Why is there no moooookore!
Don't do this to meeeee!
*grumbles petulantly*
Trickster79 chapter 26 . 1/18
Lol, Kakashi's training method is...wow. Just. Poor Sasuke...on another note, what happened to our bloodthirsty Gaara that only speaked to insnpire nightmares in his enemies? And what about Orochimaru being polite AND considerate?! And hell, even Kabuto was totally different! I have to say thought, this changes made my day, 'cause I was totally preparred to read a re-written version of cannon with little changes but wow, did this fic blew my mind. I loved all chapters and of course this Chunnin exams versions are amazing. I love how Naruto is more powerful than in cannon but at the same time he isn't god-like level of powerful (yet.) In the other hand, I also think the dynamics between Team 7 are the most sane/not-super dysfunctional I've ever read in fanfics. And let's not forget the building relationship between Hinata and Naruto, whose date and overall relationship, is one of the sweetest I've read 'till now? All in all, great work :D
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12
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Guest chapter 18 . 12/8/2017
I absolutely loved how you handeled Hiashi his scenes, how Hinata is growing and acting, how Naruto is different and stronger but not OP, how the rest of team 7 is different but subtly and gradualu changing, AMAZING how you handeled the chunin exam round you really had me convinced. And then this sasuke/ibiki conversation AWESOME and also so realistic from the village's perspective towards sasuke! Oh and that ino shika choiji scene was so funny, still wondering what exactly shika did... :D
mckertis chapter 2 . 11/13/2017
Kunoichi : one of nine ? Dafuck ? Tried googling it, moron ?
Guest chapter 18 . 11/1/2017
I normally don't comment until the end of a story but I really didn't want to forget but the was one of the most unique and one of the best Chunin exams I have read and it was only the beginning. Most authors uses the chin in exam to set the pace for each character in terms of where they are going. The way you started the exam was different from most of what I have read but so obvious in some ways because it needed to be done. I really liked that.
SilverStream1706 chapter 26 . 9/30/2017
This is the best depiction of smart Naruto that I've seen. The way you've depicted the ninja world and how it's been affected by the Brained Beasts instead of the Tailed Beasts : perfect. I especially liked your depiction of Gaara. Jiraiya is hilarious and Kakashi doesn't play favourites for once. Shikamaru's intelligence lives up to his full potential and Sakura gets over Sasuke. I can't wait for the Chunuin exam finals arc to come out and I was really happy to see that this fic isn't dead or abandoned. Keep up the good work!
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