|Reviews for twenty eight days|
| 7thseven chapter 1 . 6/21
Wow that was really good!
Just one thing-I think you meant morning dew not mildew. Mildew smells awful.
Great story! :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2016
Like this story
| Bluedog270 chapter 1 . 8/2/2016
I've come back and re-read this three times now, and each time it's like reading a new story. I loved this, I loved how everyone was in character, and the dark twist on everything really made this story one-of-a-kind and also one of my all time favorites.
You have a serious talent with writing and I hope you never give it up because you're amazing at it. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/24/2016
I can't believe you would torture us by leaving this wonderful piece as a oneshot. Now I will forever be haunted by the various storylines and endings that this could lead to.
Did I mention this was amazing? Because this is one of the best Shadow Wally fics I've seen! :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2015
you should do an epilogue.
| foxyrocksjh chapter 1 . 9/2/2015
please make a sequel. this was very good and interesting and a new concept that really worked. you also managed to keep everyone in character very well
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
I absolutely love this story, the writing only adding to the beauty of it. I've also been hoping that you would create a sequel or companion story pertaining to what was happening with the League. That's probably not going to happen, bt I love the one shot anyway! I hope you write more!
| WonderWalrus chapter 1 . 5/26/2015
Love this, love the character development, plot and writing. Awesome
| AlyssPotter chapter 1 . 4/9/2015
AMAZING! Please write a sequel! The details and plot were very well thought out! I loved it!
| LeviathanReaper chapter 1 . 2/16/2015
Beautiful story! I just loved it! I am absolutely positively lost for words!
| Bookworm85 chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
Good story. Thanks for writing.
| Live.Laugh.Write.Repeat chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
Being a SPITFIRE lover, I have read a lot of Artemis and Wally fanfictions and can I just say... This is THE BEST fanfiction I have EVER read. Not just for Young Justice, but fanfictions across the board.
It was unique and I loved it. The different perspective that Wally is the one in with the Shadows is genius. It gives you a whole new look on things and makes you really think about the difficult position Wally is in throughout the text due to his tendency to help Artemis. The way you have portrayed the relationship between Wally and Artemis and how it evolves is amazing and grips the reader into becoming emotionally attached to them, without being your stereotypical 'Cinderella' fairy tale, which (in many cases) ruins a good fanfiction.
If there is one thing I applauded you for, it is your creativity and amazing imagination... I could NEVER have thought of something this good! Thank you so much for such an enjoyable fan fiction (P.S. I am writing a review to let you know how awesome this is because so far I've read this story 9 times...)
| lizzieonawhim chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
btw that last review was me. I expected it to make me log in and then it didn't. :P
| lizzieonawhim chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
I keep picturing the scene where Wally and Artemis reach the Justice League again and I know like 99.9% of everybody would be really angry and suspicious, but then I picture Barry coming forward and saying in this really disbelieving, tremulous voice, "...Wally?" And then BEAR HUG. And possibly actual crying. I mean they are family, after all! And then Wally still has to face consequences for his actions but he's given a chance to earn a place with the good guys. I know you're probably done with this fic, but I just wanted to say that I would love to see that scene, and if you don't want to write it, would you mind terribly if I did? It would be a while before I wrote it, if I got around to it at all, but I want to make sure you're okay with it before I seriously consider the idea.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/23/2014
This was sweet. I'm not usually a spitefire or artemis fan but this definatly has started making me think again, even though KF did seem a bit wet around the ears throughout the fic. He makes an adorably terrible villan lol. Would love to see a sequal to this! Exploration of the sparking spitefire and relationship between the Barry and his fallen-but-now-returned sidekick would be awesome to read