| Reviews for Lay the Past |
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  GLaDOSChell chapter 7 . 7/4/2013 Good story but strange ending, why are there things that say 'Rest in Peace' when they haven't died? If you can tell me I'd be grateful. - GLaDOSChell |
 Stephaim Fan chapter 1 . 7/3/2013 Am I the only one who cried when Space died? No? Okay then. |
| 8thDimention chapter 7 . 7/3/2013 Dude...Im crying right now... |
| Daniella Violet Moon chapter 7 . 7/3/2013 Now I can only imagine someone wandering the graveyard and finding these and trying to figure out who named their child/pet "The Wheatley Core"... A satisfying conclusion indeed. Happysad ending with burning kitchens can never be wrong. DVM |
| The Solar Surfer chapter 7 . 7/2/2013 I loved this! It was short and sweet :) I'm also a big fan of Chell/Wheatley, and I liked how it was soft and friendly in this one. Sometimes love stories are really heavy on the angst or lust angle, but you played this naturally, and I really appreciate that. Unless that wasn't what you were going for...but that's how I thought of it :D I also think Wheatley's dialogue at the end was hilarious. I couldn't wait for him to speak again! |
| grassclaw555 chapter 7 . 7/2/2013 that was so sweet! that was probably the best ending you could have ever made for this story! good luck with future stories! |
| NotAMoron chapter 7 . 7/1/2013 OH MY GOSH THIS IS PERFECT. Really, I'm recommending this to all of my friends that I haven't already recommended this to. |
| kingtransformo chapter 7 . 7/1/2013 That was a fantastic ending! This fic has definitely earned a spot in my favorites! Great work! |
| Umbre0n chapter 7 . 7/1/2013 *stands, claps* Woo! I'm not gonna lie, I teared up at the end. |
| Your Everyday Fandom Nut chapter 7 . 7/1/2013 Oh..my... How I loved this story. So well written, so heartfelt. I even felt a little fluff in there. |
| Daniella Violet Moon chapter 6 . 6/29/2013 Aw... I am so glad that your Wheatley just came out and told her. Anything else wouldn't feel right. And Chell gets it. Thank you for a calm chapter. This could have been very different but what is is here is perfect. DVM |
| valakaite chapter 6 . 6/28/2013 I love this story. I love their little universe that you've created. i really like how they story progresses and its not just the immediate happenings of whats going on. i love how regretful wheatley is and yet he still tries to be near chell because he wants her company while she doesnt know who he is. i think thats really great . she's also written very well with how she thinks through things and doesnt just rush into them or act simply on her emotions and i really do love that. im excited for the next chapter you're doing really great so far and i want to see more! |
| 8thDimention chapter 6 . 6/26/2013 I'm crying right now. I also cried in the forth chapter. I love this story and can't wait until chapter 7. Please continue. |
| The-doctor-is-on-fire chapter 6 . 6/25/2013 I love you now. go have a cookie. you deserve it. |
| 0oRainbowBlazeo0 chapter 6 . 6/24/2013 I dunno... If I was Chell and found out the man was Wheatley, I would just hug him, for a while. I have no explanation, I just would. |