Reviews for Lay the Past
Stephaim Fan chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
Am I the only one who cried when Space died? No? Okay then.
8thDimention chapter 7 . 7/3/2013
Dude...Im crying right now...
Daniella Violet Moon chapter 7 . 7/3/2013
Now I can only imagine someone wandering the graveyard and finding these and trying to figure out who named their child/pet "The Wheatley Core"...
A satisfying conclusion indeed. Happysad ending with burning kitchens can never be wrong.
DVM
The Solar Surfer chapter 7 . 7/2/2013
I loved this! It was short and sweet :) I'm also a big fan of Chell/Wheatley, and I liked how it was soft and friendly in this one. Sometimes love stories are really heavy on the angst or lust angle, but you played this naturally, and I really appreciate that. Unless that wasn't what you were going for...but that's how I thought of it :D
I also think Wheatley's dialogue at the end was hilarious. I couldn't wait for him to speak again!
grassclaw555 chapter 7 . 7/2/2013
that was so sweet! that was probably the best ending you could have ever made for this story! good luck with future stories!
NotAMoron chapter 7 . 7/1/2013
OH MY GOSH THIS IS PERFECT.

Really, I'm recommending this to all of my friends that I haven't already recommended this to.
kingtransformo chapter 7 . 7/1/2013
That was a fantastic ending! This fic has definitely earned a spot in my favorites! Great work!
Umbre0n chapter 7 . 7/1/2013
*stands, claps* Woo! I'm not gonna lie, I teared up at the end.
Your Everyday Fandom Nut chapter 7 . 7/1/2013
Oh..my... How I loved this story. So well written, so heartfelt. I even felt a little fluff in there.
Daniella Violet Moon chapter 6 . 6/29/2013
Aw...
I am so glad that your Wheatley just came out and told her. Anything else wouldn't feel right. And Chell gets it.
Thank you for a calm chapter. This could have been very different but what is is here is perfect.
DVM
valakaite chapter 6 . 6/28/2013
I love this story. I love their little universe that you've created. i really like how they story progresses and its not just the immediate happenings of whats going on.

i love how regretful wheatley is and yet he still tries to be near chell because he wants her company while she doesnt know who he is. i think thats really great . she's also written very well with how she thinks through things and doesnt just rush into them or act simply on her emotions and i really do love that.

im excited for the next chapter you're doing really great so far and i want to see more!
8thDimention chapter 6 . 6/26/2013
I'm crying right now. I also cried in the forth chapter. I love this story and can't wait until chapter 7. Please continue.
The-doctor-is-on-fire chapter 6 . 6/25/2013
I love you now. go have a cookie. you deserve it.
0oRainbowBlazeo0 chapter 6 . 6/24/2013
I dunno... If I was Chell and found out the man was Wheatley, I would just hug him, for a while. I have no explanation, I just would.
Umbre0n chapter 6 . 6/24/2013
Poor puppy-man.
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