Reviews for Lay the Past |
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4m33s chapter 3 . 6/3/2013 I love how the situation is reversed here, where Wheatley is a mute and Chell is the one to lead the conversation. I also like the idea how Chell and Wheatley doesn't know each other. Really makes me wish to see their faces when they finally figured out XD But one curious thing: wouldn't Wheatley be able to remember her face, or eyes, at least? Also, I couldn't help but think of 'Ace of fours' when I heard his new name :D Did you just add it there, or is it going to be another plot device? Lovely story! Keep up, you are doing great. ;-) |
Umbre0n chapter 3 . 6/3/2013 This fic is so weird. In a good way. |
kingtransformo chapter 2 . 5/30/2013 I am thoroughly enjoying this story! Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome writing! |
Aanon chapter 2 . 5/27/2013 Whoa, it's rather sad that every other core had died. But still, I like the idea of Wheatley being mute. Nice story! Would like to see another chapter :) |
Umbre0n chapter 2 . 5/27/2013 A mute Wheatley... oh he's going to go nuts in a few days, I already know it. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2013 I love it so far! Keep it up :D. -Soap |
Umbre0n chapter 1 . 5/20/2013 Holy crap, shotgun. Good job, lady. |