Reviews for Lay the Past
4m33s chapter 3 . 6/3/2013
I love how the situation is reversed here, where Wheatley is a mute and Chell is the one to lead the conversation. I also like the idea how Chell and Wheatley doesn't know each other. Really makes me wish to see their faces when they finally figured out XD But one curious thing: wouldn't Wheatley be able to remember her face, or eyes, at least?

Also, I couldn't help but think of 'Ace of fours' when I heard his new name :D Did you just add it there, or is it going to be another plot device?

Lovely story! Keep up, you are doing great. ;-)
Umbre0n chapter 3 . 6/3/2013
This fic is so weird. In a good way.
kingtransformo chapter 2 . 5/30/2013
I am thoroughly enjoying this story! Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome writing!
Aanon chapter 2 . 5/27/2013
Whoa, it's rather sad that every other core had died. But still, I like the idea of Wheatley being mute. Nice story! Would like to see another chapter :)
Umbre0n chapter 2 . 5/27/2013
A mute Wheatley... oh he's going to go nuts in a few days, I already know it.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
I love it so far! Keep it up :D.

-Soap
Umbre0n chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Holy crap, shotgun. Good job, lady.
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