Reviews for Naruto: Destiny's Worst Nightmare
Homarid chapter 5 . 2/20/2014
Good chapter. The fights were fine. The strategy was interesting and they used the techniques in new ways.
SoraHuuzuke chapter 5 . 2/20/2014
I like this story and am glad I found it. I look forward to seeing how it continues.
mfmxxx chapter 4 . 2/20/2014
Naruto is too pro-hinata for no reason at the minute, seems like trying to promote her too much.
Kunoichi of the Moonlit Night chapter 5 . 2/20/2014
Good chapter :)
Guest chapter 5 . 2/20/2014
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BRD man chapter 4 . 2/20/2014
Hmmm. If I were Naruto, after calling to end the fight like that I would unleash the CRUELLEST and NASTIEST hardcore prank spree on Hayate I could for allowing that torture to happen after she so obviously lost.
AJrax chapter 5 . 2/20/2014
Good chapter. The fight scenes were very good. However, I'm starting to get a little bored with you using the same little tropes in some of these fights, mostly in the Naruto VS Gaara fights. I mean, I know that it's pretty much for the best that you stick to what's canon in this type of field, but really, I've read ALL of your past Naruto stories, mind you, and each of these "canon kept" fights can really get repetitive if you tend to do the same types of things over again. Don't take this the wrong way, just try to maybe spice things up a little more in the future. Make it seem more original. And also try to work on dialogue more. Other than that, solid Exam fights, solid writing and solid excitement for what's to come in the future. :)
Guest chapter 5 . 2/19/2014
Please update again soon and keep up the great work!
Iceflame55 chapter 5 . 2/19/2014
Interesting indeed :)
tadkins chapter 5 . 2/19/2014
Nice chapter and definitely different than the last iteration your wrote. The different fights were written well enough to each of the characters. Only thing I couldn't catch was a lead up to "who would be fighting who", it kinda just appeared so it made for a little confusion when reading the last chapter (since there didn't seem to be any "match previews" for the chunnin finals". Otherwise than that, I enjoyed reading this chapter.
gamelover41592 chapter 5 . 2/19/2014
awesome work
FinalGuardian chapter 5 . 2/19/2014
Nice and to the point, without unneeded bashing.
plums chapter 5 . 2/19/2014
Not a bad rewrite... makes a LOT more sense than the last one.

I just hope you don't let the story degenerate into Danzo-land silliness again.
Cerulean Knight chapter 5 . 2/19/2014
What does Naruto's hiraishin do? It sounds like a kunai super charged with lightning chakra. Can oil be ignited by lightning?
Scoobygirl45 chapter 4 . 2/3/2014
I like it, cant wait for more!1
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