Reviews for Naruto: Destiny's Worst Nightmare
Daphne-Greengrass-Potter-fan chapter 2 . 5/25/2013
the story is great so far keep it up also just a suggestion you could have naruto enter his minde-scape and sort through his parents memories 2 learn there skills better

p.s. the current tittle isn't 2 bad i've seen worse well keep it up thanks
calel chapter 2 . 5/25/2013
Well the memories give him help but he still needs to train his body plus he needs to learn basics of fuinjutsu, ninjutsu, taijutsu gen and kenjutsu before he can master the stuff plus if he wants to surpass his parents, he will need to do more.

Title: Naruto's Ascent
semaxx3 chapter 2 . 5/25/2013
Great work, but you should try to find a beta to fix the errors in your grammar.
FuujinNoKitsune chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
I hope you continue this, can't wait to see where this story goes!
Erasels chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
Once again, a piece of art :D
You should leave the title as it is, I like it :p
Hmmmmm, criticism... not much really. The only thing that I would citizise is that Naruto just tells Sakura and Sasuke about his Jinchuuriki status.
Well then, I hope I'm allowed to enjoy another chapter in near future :D
(•3•) Puhhh
perses7x chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
good ch...update soon
Lanelle chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
Story name suggestions? Hummm... here's a few that come to mind-

-Memory backlash...
-Flow of Memories...
-Mind of Three...
-Overshadowed...
-Crimson Thoughts (you know like for the Kyuubi's chakra color)
-The Will of Three (Play on the 'will of fire' saying the village has for people willing to fight for it)

Anyways I had an idea pop in my head for your story (just ignore it if you don't like it) When it comes to the point where Naruto is fighting in the third part of the exam, how about in order to prep for it you have Naruto ask the Hokage for a list of all the jutsu and general skills the 4th and his mother were known for so that he can go down the list and check which ones he knows and which ones he needs to work on? It seems like the smart thing to do and it seems to me that minato's mind is influencing Naruto more then Kushina's. He seems alittle more level headed from the flashbacks.

Anyways I'm enjoying the story! Thanks for writting it and good luck!

Lanelle
Get-Lost chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
Please use father and mother because unnecessary Japanese is unnecessary, as well as annoying as hell. It's unnecessary because English has perfectly good words that mean the same, try them sometime. Mother and father, how's that sound? As a bonus they don't sound retarded like tousan or kaasan.
Radiant Celestial Aura chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
Interesting concept. I can't wait to see where you take this story! :D
dracohalo117 chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
Nice chapter...keep it coming...

dracohalo117
whitecloud222 chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
keep it going good right now
NIX'S WARDEN chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
VERY NICE! Love the idea man. Naruto is gunna be a serious badass. Can he get his mother's chakra chains but on steroids since naruto has the kyuubi's energy leaking into him from the seal.
AJrax chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
Another nice chapter. Overall, this is very good and well thought out. I have some suggestions, though: First of, I think this can be renamed "The Orange Spark"; if you don't remember, that's the name of the episode in Shippuden where Naruto meets Kushina for the first time and she tells him about her past with Minato. She comments that when you put Minato (Yellow Flash) and her (Red Hot Habanero) together, you get Naruto, the Orange Spark. Get it? :P (He actuallly called himself the Orange Hokage, but I personally think Spark sounds better.) Another thing is that you should cut down on the Japanese wordplay and scripting. Seriously, we're not watching the anime, you don't have to go weeaboo on us. (I actually enjoy the English Dub, thank you very much). This isn't a rant or a insult, it's just criticism. Take it or leave it. It's your fic, and in reality, I can't really stop you from writing the way you want to. Other than those things, this chapter was, again, great. :)
DarkFlareX chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
Is Naruto going to be paired with anyone?
Guest chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
eh he can't even control his emotions. also the fight sucked. canon naruto who had nothing but kage bunshin and kyuubi's minimal chakra boost fought way better than this.
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