Reviews for Parallel Perry
captain weirdo chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
This was fun! A great premise. :) Love how Perry took his own advice with Burger at the end.

One small style suggestion - you might try breaking up long paragraphs. They are sometimes hard to follow. You could start a new paragraph with each line of dialogue.
Pamela Ryan chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
First your story is not bizarre, what is bizarre is I have recently become very interested in parallel lives. I have looked for information about it and here is your story. Great idea and concept.
murphycat chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Original story. Wished it had been more detailed in the conversation. I liked it.