|Reviews for The Darkness Created Us|
| Issun the Wandering Writer chapter 1 . 10/13/2018
Well its excellent for a first try, the WW1 segments were always my favorite pats of the first game so its nice to someone willing to expand on that unsettling eerie setting just a little bit.
| Edhla chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
This is great, particularly for a first fanfic (and I'm totally canon blind!) A couple of grammar/tense issues (there's vs. there've; come vs. came) but I thought you captured your narrator's voice incredibly realistically and vividly, and really liked this bit:
"He died. More specifically, he killed himself. The Darkness was outraged, so it brought down its rage on us."
Thankyou for writing - great work xx