Reviews for Night and Star
corticarte apa lagranges chapter 5 . 6/26/2014
awww Paul is so cute and Star and Night are awesome Please let there be a sequel or update. I hope Paul is his mate
College101 chapter 8 . 4/3/2014
I can be your beta for this story, if you still need one.
College101 chapter 7 . 4/3/2014
Great you pick who would be Night's mate/s yet?
harrypotterfreakhier chapter 7 . 1/31/2014
love it next chapter please
Manwathiel55567 chapter 7 . 1/26/2014
Please continue
Guest chapter 7 . 1/17/2014
More more and please make pual his mate
merlinike54 chapter 7 . 1/2/2014
Hey.
So far I really like the story.
I look forward to the sequel.
I'm curious to evolve to embrace Paul.
I was brought up Nightot Paul.
guest chapter 7 . 8/1/2013
its awsome please update :)
TalonNight chapter 7 . 7/2/2013
I like this story its different. :)
PAULSEXYASSWOLF chapter 4 . 6/4/2013
Are you kidding me you seriously think anyone but Paul would be a great mate for Night.
Edward wouldn't make a good choice as he always so serious and quite frankly boring.
Plus think of all the sexy situations you could put Paul in.
MMM , am thinking of Paul surprising Night wearing only a pair of black silk boxers and nothing else nice vision right.
Update soon as i really need to know who you've chosen great story by the way
Guest chapter 4 . 6/3/2013
Loving your story and for once i really like an o*c character Night seems sweet and fun and am a sucker for dogs so Star gets a big thumbs up from me as well.

As for Nights possible mate/mates i really hope you don't go down the same boring route others have which is make either Edward or Jacob the o*c ,mates .

I think by doing that you shut the door on many interesting pairings and the chance to use other characters who are mostly ignored and just treated as background noise.

There's Quil, Jared, Embry and yes even Paul.

I can't help but think that Edward and Jacob work better together as mates mainly due to the chemistry and U*R*S*T , between the two actors i mean come on that tent scene alone was full of hot sexual tension.
Romancing the boys chapter 4 . 6/2/2013
I am pouting and begging for Seth/Paul as his mates.
If not Seth I will let you give him someone sexy but NOT Edward sorry don't like him so much :P
So does my review count?
Mmmm maybe I should try getting more reviews by holding back.
Anyway enjoying the story ;)
RTB
xxx
Guest chapter 4 . 6/1/2013
PAUL MOST DEFO Making Edward his mate is to obvious and i feel this story is a great change from some of the stories posted on here.
Also it would give us a chance to see Paul play something other then the angry vampire hater.
suntan140 chapter 2 . 5/30/2013
i choose seth, paul, or/and edward
Romancing the boys chapter 2 . 5/28/2013
Hey Kit
I found your story :D
Right first of all I think this has awesome potential and would like to say I'm with guest and would love to see a Paul/Seth/Moon ;)
Looking forward to more
RTB
xxx
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