Reviews for Flickers of Fireflies |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Firey. Hot. Delicious. What. o.o |
![]() ![]() ![]() SARU. Y U PUSH HER? I'm super happy Hotaru is getting along well with HOMRA though. Sooo glad they're all having a good time together! *Ahem* Michi here! I changed my pen name becuase of anonymity issues, bwahaha. (I LOVE MY ANONYMITYYYYY-) Ehehe, it's glad to see you back too. You can put your A/N whereveeeeeer you want, Usa-chan! I'll still read it! (/ w )/ Toodaloo, my love! (/ 3)/ -michinakimichi |
![]() ![]() So happy So happy Nice chap :D About the wait, believe me, there are a lot of autors who do not upload a chap for a much longer time than you xD Hotaru is really funny, I like her Best wishes Lulu |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well fudge. Feels are going to be felt, aren't they? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is brilliant D |
![]() ![]() Hahahaha, Hotaru is so great! :D Poor Yata hihihihi Please write more :) I hope to read the next chapter soon ;) Best wishes Lulu |
![]() ![]() ![]() Usa-chan! (Can I call ya that? You never told me what you want me to call you! :P) Your story is blowing my mind to atomic bits with its sheer epicness and high-quality humour. x) I absolutely adore Hotaru and Hibiki, they are some truly awesome OCs. And Yata is just so ridiculously cute! He's blushing so much and when you made him (or rather Hotaru did) touch her breast I had to cluth to my sides to contain my laughter! Ah, so funny! The sentence "I ain't a boy. I'm a fucking man!" will forever stay in my mind as a sweet reminder of this purely addicting story. Oh, and I really don't see that much OOC-ness. Saru's and Yata's personalities fit their original characters so don't worry too much, just keep doing what you're doing. You have them right! ;) You have added a wonderful fanfiction on this site, I'm so happy to be able to read it! ;) |
![]() ![]() i haven't much experience with guys (and thier taste... Hell no) but i think it would be proper if... Saru tasted like black coffee or blackcurrant icecream or slightly bitter apple or dark chocolate or cool and sharp mint. (c'mon it doesn't have to be blue) and Yata tasted like grapefruit or slightly sour plum or may be almond or may be... Yes bubblegum! That would be so skaterboy-ish. If u like my ideas please let me know! And if not then do the same... I luv ur stories. Subtle, gangster-ish and so sexy. Keep rocking XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() He better get his flithy hands off Anna! (( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Usa-chan... This chappy is so beautiful. ; u ; Saru is beginning to grow on me... ; u ;'' |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job! :D Just read through, and I can't really spot the changes, but they've made a difference. I understand it more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why so short? I need more -throws tantrum- Please? -looks at you with teary eyes- Please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, damn that cliffhanger. usagi-san, I'm a little confused with who was talking during chapter 8... :p |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah, that was intense.. I have to say, you've done a truly fantastic job with these recent chapters, especially this last one! To be honest, this is probably one of the best K OC fics I've ever read! Please update soon, I'm just dying to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's... it's beautiful. :'D |