Reviews for A Lesson in Loyalty |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The tension is so high between them, please let it break soon and something happen! There's not too many chapters left! At least something akin to understanding send to be passing between them, so hopefully it's a start. Lovely chapter, as always! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *unhappy sigh* Oh poor Severus.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Goodness me, that was certainly an oversight on his part lol, one I'm sure he'll be correcting. But shouldn't he also get a clue when she voluntarily comes back instead of running away? And shouldn't she get a clue when he doesn't hurt her or otherwise abuse her in any way? Come on, they've got to wake up sooner or later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely writing, as always, but they are both frustrating me. Use your head Hermione! Sit and actually think about things and see all the little bits that don't add up and come to the right damn conclusion. And Severus! With her as his 'prisoner' he could actively teach her occulemency and tell her everything without worry! Stupid man! Grr... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This could either turn out to be a really good thing, or a really bad thing. What is Severus going to do? How are Harry and Ron going to complete the mission with her? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dammit. Sigh. I was really hoping he was going to find a way around this part. Damn. Now what? How in the world are Severus and Hermione going to come together now? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, by the way you emphasize 'plan' at the end there, me thinks that things aren't going to happen that way at all... [unhappy sigh] |
![]() ![]() ![]() [growls] I can forgive his natural response, but I don't have to like it. Infuriating man. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Things are getting real serious real quick.. I wonder what Severus is going to do? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh goodness. Down the darkened rabbit hole we go.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my... well I imagine that was certainly a sight! I wonder what went through Snapes mind when he heard the bell go off? LOLOLOL Meeting every night for a month? Seems like something promising could happen during that time... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well at least Hermione is on board and Severus is reluctantly admitting it to himself. I think things are progressing quite nicely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lolololololol... That was hilarious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really do love the double layered story, of cannon mixing with the new plot, it makes it all so interesting and realistic! |