Reviews for Iryo-nin Kasa (医療忍傘)
Uriya chapter 3 . 2/19
Gakure means hidden, Sato would be village, konohagakure is hidden leaf, konohagakure no sato is the village hidden in the leaves
CHILD PORN chapter 1 . 2/18
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FrostyKat chapter 89 . 12/12/2023
Im crying i loved rayne
Mr-Luca-Wolf chapter 7 . 12/5/2023
Hanky spanky ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
LittleFrench chapter 16 . 11/16/2023
There’s a big problem in the narration though, or maybe it’s intended but the battle at the bridge which marks thedeathof Obito ends the 3rd war not the second… I do hope we don’t get another 3rd war
asianf chapter 115 . 10/31/2023
I loved this Fic! Thank you, author, for the insane amount of effort that must've gone into writing it. I liked Rayne's character the most, so it was really nice to see some of her traits come through to the new Kasa, and I'm glad she got to leave Konoha and pursue her own life and find herself. Great job!
estar12 chapter 47 . 10/6/2023
I thought santa died like 3 chapters ago
CHILD PORN chapter 1 . 9/30/2023
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CHILD PORN chapter 1 . 9/27/2023
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Blue-Happens chapter 2 . 7/25/2023
why are people afraid to let the second pair of parents who raise them be considered a 'mom' and 'dad' figure?

there are real life humans who have multiple people they might call by these titles, and the meaning behind the words, and the familial bond should certainly apply to these two new parents!
that lady birthed you, wiped your butt, and is teaching you about the world around you. how does your reincarnation possibly detract from that?

(it's how the character feels, which doesn't always speak to how the author feels or political correctness. I just needed to rant for a second)
KingOfEmptyness chapter 2 . 7/8/2023
ok
Guest chapter 114 . 6/14/2023
This is my favorite story now it was very much fun
hanniesaegi chapter 1 . 5/2/2023
re-reading because its just too good
Spirited Honoka chapter 6 . 4/6/2023
Why isn't Kusa's surname "Uzumaki?" The Naruto world doesn't work like ours. Children wouldn't automatically receive their father's surname if their mother came from a prestigious clan like the Uzumaki. That's the main and only reason Naruto takes his mother's surname of Uzumaki and not Minato's last name of Namikaze. It has nothing to do with Minato having too many enemies. That's always been a misconception that makes no sense.

Every shinobi has enemies, not just Minato, and Naruto having Kushina's surname isn't going to somehow diminish the chances of enemies coming after him, not when he looks like an exact carbon copy of his father. Heck, Lady Chiyo rushed Kakashi in the Gaara retrieval arc because she thought he was his father.
Spirited Honoka chapter 5 . 4/6/2023
This is a little annoying, though I get you weren't in a good place when you started this, it doesn't make your character any less frustrating. I don't get why she was so worried about being thrown into the Torture and Interrogation department. She's 4. It's not like she has any useful information to share. As someone else mentioned in the reviews, Konoha wouldn't really bat much of an eyelash over a civilian orphan coming into the village. (Kabuto walked into the village just fine, after all) Really, I'm sure Hiruzen would be delighted to have another Uzumaki in his ranks.

There's absolutely no such thing of a council. I'm sorry, but in the nicest way I can say, research the source material before you start a story. DON'T just assume something exists from other fics that implemented their own ideas. Konoha runs on a dictatorship. It's NOT a democracy. There is no voting system in the village. The only conference we see in Naruto is the one Hiruzen shares with the other elders, Homura, Koharu and Danzo. Really, the only one Kasa would need to watch out for is Danzo since he takes the emotion out of affairs and views everything with cold, clinical pragmaticism. I apologize for getting heated, it's just that this council troupe is so annoying, especially when it doesn't exist in Naruto.

As others reviewers have mentioned, it's beyond weird that Kasa opened up to Obito despite barely knowing him and yet treats her own parents like strangers, choosing to refer to them by their given names and not mom and dad in her narration. It's not like they were cold and distant, quite the contrary, really. You seemed to depict them as quite kind and caring. It doesn't feel natural.

The random Japanese phrases are still awfully annoying. The only honorifics you need are san, kun and chan. Everything else is redundant. You also neglected to attach an kun-suffix to Kushina's name. Kun can also be attached to a female name's, too, no problem. It's more of a semi-formal honorific older people attach to young people's names, so Hiruzen would most definitely refer to Kushina as "Kushina-kun" here.
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