Reviews for A Devil will Rise
Nick chapter 5 . 9/12
This is pretty good I like how this fic is progressing but I'm not sure how I feel on Naruto being some sort of evil genius I'm not saying he's evil he's just giving off that vibe I kinda want to see I do kinda want to see a little bit of his human side but all and all I really enjoy this story keep up the good work update soon please
FanfictionAdmirer1 chapter 5 . 8/9
I love your story it is one of the best Naruto abandoned stories I have read so far, I must say you have outdone yourself on this story anyway when is the next chapter coming out because I am really looking for to it.
Jdn chapter 5 . 6/13
The the next chapter better must be pretty good it it's taking you 3 years to write.
NarutoNEED Harem chapter 5 . 5/5
Ummmm would you please have naruto meet TWO good demons (female) to be close with a level that there relationship becomes close that of a loving siblings( and Escalates to an intimate romantic one) that his brat of siaters would be super jealous of him especially Risa( nice charc. Btw)..
And in the future he will finally tell them MOST(not all) parts of How he UTTERLY HATES THEM, and just Tolerate Mito( not close enough to be friends YET). So they'll be Hurt bad( hehehe sadist)... BUT YOU KNOW THIS ONLY A SUGGESTION ..the final one goes to you... PLSS KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK..THIS STORY IS AMAZING :) ;)...
The 1st Zodiac chapter 5 . 5/6
How's it going? I know it's along time since you posted but I, (and I think many else) would love for you to pick the story back up again. It's an awesome story, and as you asked alittle something about the fighting scenes, they are not the best that I have read, but that doesn't mean that they aren't good, infact they are quiet good but it could be improve some I think. Another thing is that I noticed that you had someone bets read your chapters for you, I could help with that, (if you want) or just give a second opinion. And lastly, as said, I hope that you continue with story even if it has been a couple of years.
M chapter 5 . 5/1
Nice job with this story so far. Can't wait till next chapter is updated soon.
Aurora - Kitsune Lord Of Fire chapter 1 . 5/2
This piece of shit better STAY dead.
HitmaN007 chapter 5 . 4/23
love it please update soon
christopherrhaydon chapter 5 . 4/7
This story is truly impressive. But if u don't mind me asking, could you give me an idea as to how does Naruto creating his own curse mark play a part in the story? Please update ASAP;)!
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 5 . 2/5
Great story but is it ever going to be updated?
Lucifer chapter 1 . 1/16
Did nobody notice the person who wrote this fucked up Yamato's name? No offence, author, but still.
fairyninja73 chapter 5 . 1/4
Please please continue the story...
This kind of naruto is hardly seen and is very interesting...
Please continue the story
DeadParade chapter 5 . 7/21/2015
Love the story, hope it continues
Ashhearth chapter 5 . 6/30/2015
I really love this story. It's really good and interesting. The way you made Naruto be is very enjoyable. I want to read more of it. I beg of you, continue it.
tastybigsexy chapter 5 . 5/17/2015
I loved you're story why have you stopped updating it? Please continue.
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