Ending with some messy threads was well done. Not he cleanest story but amusing ad different. Well done.

I stumbled across this story today and am rather impressed. This was a rather enjoyable and in character take of a possible post wedding Ranma. It was well written and while it does not have a fixed conclusion it still feels complete. Well done. Now, I'm off to read more of your writing! Tally ho!

I think you have neglected getting Nodoka Saotome into this mess long enough. And it would be fun for Ranma's aunties to meet Ranma-chan. After all they dolled him up as a kid imagine lessons she can learn that would actually help.

Might also be fun if Ranma did find out some details of the day say by overhearing Yuka and Saiyuri also trying to piece it together. Or sasuke and Konatsu. People who might be too distracted trying to work it out to realise Ranma is hearing them but involved enough to get gossip on it.

Daniel Thomas Stack
AKA Spokavriel at yahoo.

Well, you've certainly been adding some nice spice to Nerima with this story.

I think... most of the fic has been "eh, okay, but I was there for the Ranma boom of the mid-90s and I'm not that nostalgic" but this last chapter, especially the end, really makes me want to see some more. IT's easily the most interesting R1/2 development I've seen in years.

Questa storia non l'hai continuata più, peccato

A nice and very interesting story so far, hope you won't abandon it.

See you next year for chapter 5 ? ;)

Kool story.
Hope you add more or finish it before I kick the bucket.
Drama with a decent amount of comedy slathered on.
Comdramity!
Some Rama stories are epic.
Some I wish the author had gotten more of their vision down on paper.
Most are never finished and always leave me hungry like a dinner with 20 people and only enough food for 5.
Alot of FFs are written by those whose English is a second language which I don't claim to be an English speaker because English in the U.S. Only vaguely resembles English. Yep, we were freed from British rule and took their language and made it our own. I state that as a fact not as a point of pride. American English is English that was dumped into a vat add in a smattering of Germanic and romantic languages and a pinch of every other language and when you ladle it out you can still see the base language but it has run like a red shirt in load of white sheets and personal clothing items.
It's interesting but fairly confusing even to us.
Keep the imagination wet as a desiccated imagination won't produce rich stories.
LBM
no email as I don't use it enough.

So far so good. Keep going.

HAHAHAHHA laugh laugh laugh.. laugh. So I'm pretty sure at this point that I was mistaken, this isn't the fic I thought it was, but's pretty funny!

...Huh. This is on FFN? I must've gotten confused and thought it would be on mailing list archives, but the publish date doesn't lie.

good stuff

Well this was fun to read, thanks!

I can't wait to see what happens next.

I hope for a update for this to come soon. It is so amusing, and Ranma takes all challenges seriously! The reactions to it will be awesome!~ The wait... it pains me. TT~TT Also, I very much like Ranma-chan fics and RanxRyo fics.

I feel so bad for Ryoga right now.