Reviews for Loss of a Sister
Guest chapter 2 . 11/12/2017
(Spanish Grammar nazi attack)
Well, I guess you're already fed up by my interventions.

*The ninja laughed when she aaid that last partlike one of those BANDITOS from the Wild West."

Though the enflish word is BANDITS, Snpanish is slighty different.
BANDIDOS from the Wild West.
Drage Dragon chapter 1 . 8/4/2017
You said yellow ninja of lightning instead of wind
Grimmalkerie chapter 8 . 6/19/2013
Hmmm...lawrence better watch his back. Oh when pytgor get's him...
Guest chapter 8 . 6/8/2013
I like the part when Skales came in and was so surprise.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/4/2013
Have the generals win the hearts of pythors sisters and maybe pamela's mother not approving of pythor and talks pam out of liking him and then she asks her to make a move on the ninja maybe kai or zane or maybe even cole that would be very fun.
MARTI174 chapter 8 . 6/3/2013
On the next story will you have a love challenge on the generals and the ninja trying to wins the hearts of Pythor's sisters?
Guest chapter 8 . 6/3/2013
Hey, when the ninja meet Pythor's sisters. Can you make them say "I thought he was an only child?" from each ninja when they see them.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/3/2013
Update outlaw feline please
Also this seems like a cliffhanger so what's your next story will the snakes meet patricia Pamela's mother is Zane's father falling for her or will Garmadon show up upon hearing Lawrence escaped and he wants to help and will he fall head over heals for patricia as well.

Will the other generals know about Lawrence and will he decide to spy on them again and hear about the cure and try to slaughter Pamela or will everyone protect her.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/3/2013
Good chapter also it's done already when's the next one and when will the ninja find out she's gone also are the other generals gonna know about Lawrence along with the whole serpentine and also is she going to tell them that her mother is here as well and she has been looking for her and came here and they were reunited.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/3/2013
mah Pythor and pam are so cute togethor :D
Guest chapter 8 . 6/2/2013
Aawww, that's so sweet of little Vipie.
brave kid chapter 8 . 6/2/2013
well nice story finished,great job buddy
Guest chapter 8 . 6/2/2013
stan and dorthey golden girls
Ninjaofmusic-Nya chapter 8 . 6/2/2013
O_O Update now! !
ilovedracoDH chapter 7 . 6/1/2013
too cute too adorable :D 3
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