|Reviews for Relatively Simple|
| Reviewer chapter 5 . 7/25/2013
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| AustralianWallaby111 chapter 5 . 7/25/2013
This and you are all kind of brilliant.
| lesipiratecat chapter 5 . 6/26/2013
Awwwhh! That was lovely! Well done
| katzsoa chapter 5 . 6/26/2013
This is sweet. :) It's been a pleasure /reading/ this, and I look forward to more of these two from you in the future!
| butterflylion14 chapter 5 . 6/26/2013
Your chapters are so beautiful! Update soon! xxx
| trampledstampede chapter 5 . 6/26/2013
Great story! Thank you so much for writing. I absolutely loved the touch of your own little poetry in it, especially the last one.
| Sweetdeath04 chapter 5 . 6/26/2013
This was brilliant- I loved seeing how it affected them. And the start of the chapter in particular is so wonderfully intimate. It's just perfect! Great job!
| katzsoa chapter 4 . 6/20/2013
I'd wondered about Vastra apparently not being affected by the time-changing... I like her holding on out of sheer determination-she WILL NOT forget Jenny!
Ahh, this is emotional! Love it.
(Also, "lacuna", among other words-great vocabulary!)
| butterflylion14 chapter 4 . 6/19/2013
Aww they're soo sweet, it's soo beautiful! Update soon! xxx
| Sweetdeath04 chapter 4 . 6/19/2013
This is beautiful. The way you wrote Jenny disappearing was just... there are no words to describe it. I kinda want to curl up and cry, even if it does have a happy ending.
Beautiful. Well done!
| shamelessfangirl chapter 4 . 6/19/2013
wow, this was just a beautiful, beautiful piece of writing. i think you got the reaction and vastras thoughts bang on, and it was emotionally draining for me to read! for some reason, STOP TRYING TO TAKE HER FROM ME, just got me. thank you for taking the time to write it! are you carrying on with the fic, because i thought that it could be interesting to see how vastra would treat jenny after, like be more protective or worry. thanks again x
| lesipiratecat chapter 4 . 6/18/2013
wow. that was a very emotional, brilliant chapter. bravo!
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/14/2013
| butterflylion14 chapter 3 . 6/9/2013
great chapter update soon! xxx
| katzsoa chapter 3 . 6/9/2013
Yes. I had the same thought, during "The Name of the Doctor"-Vastra very nearly went back to her old, rage-ful self after Jenny's death. Poor girl.
I like the Doctor playing off the species bias, telling Vastra she's acting no better than the violent apes. It's the recurring theme with the Silurians; they always talk like humans are so violent, but even though we are separated by so many evolutionary steps, we aren't really all that different. We have the same self-righteousness, and the same potential to control our emotions or be controlled by them, to be either beast or man. (Woman. Lizard. Civilized being. You know what I mean.)