why would losing just one ship's reserve be such a bad thing? there is one more Jupiter 2 with the same reserves and the other military and civilian ships.
they also had 2 months to prepare and the military ship at least had their supplies

why would the body of Leoben be on the Galactica? why not in a real lab surrounded by specialists?

Reread. I like the twists to canon. It was interesting. Thanks.

Reading

Great story!

I’m only at Chapter 10 at this, but love the whole, “We have instantaneous communication by killing ourselves, so we now all have guns, but it’s still painful so we’ll hit each other instead,” the Cylons have. Totally how a human would react to that tech.

Thank you for writing this story!

a great story

It will be interesting what the fleet finds when they finally get there being that the snakes are no longer around.

4,000 years? That’s not so impressive. The city of Jericho - the same one mentioned in the Bible - has been dated back 11,000 years for the earliest settlement. And that ignores Stargate-specific examples like, say, Atlantis.

I am reminded of a tabletop roleplaying game book table for generating alternate worlds during game campaigns involving time travel or alternate universes (Transdimensional Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, by Palladium Books). One of the possible results begins “History Different, Results Similar” - and this prologue definitely is that. Definitely an interesting start. I wonder how many of those 70,000 civilians will be people Richard Adar finds politically inconvenient?

I truly enjoyed the story but did we really need to know about all the future problems? Way too much exposition at the end at least that's my opinion. Still thank you very much.

Thor seems to have made a big impression.

Started reading today, nice Idea, eager to read more

Too much of this page was taken up with arguing with some random assclown who didn’t have the courtesy or the balls to leave an actual name.