| Reviews for A Demon in the Shadows |
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   sirmikeshark chapter 8 . 10/6/2019 I've read lemons in fanfics they didn't get taken down you just can't give specific details on it like the body parts that are being used during the lemons , other then that that I can think of you shouldn't have problem put a fanfiction approved lemons in the fanfics you write just don't give specific details on the body parts in the act. Also great job on the fic here |
| Rice with Chest-Nuts chapter 3 . 9/4/2019 LOVE this already! this is really amazing! the scenario, improvising scene, change of character, ... everything! hope this still will keep going. its really dope! |
| Nate chapter 30 . 8/10/2019 Useless shitfic. |
| andre4108 chapter 6 . 7/11/2019 You did my boy Lee dirty. |
| Monster King chapter 43 . 6/18/2019 Great job please continue |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/3/2019 I'm surprised no hinata with it being a dark naruto and her being a shy and meek heiress with a byakugan no less. I'd figure her and ino with her clans mind abilities would be a target. Ino for her clan and her abilities seeing as he cant possess anyone and she can use her mind jutsu on people at places he isnt and around people who wouldnt expect her to do anything and hence not have their guard up. Seems like a waste to make that declaration from the start. |
| The Unkindness chapter 1 . 5/7/2019 Wicked start,dude. As a sugestion have Minato redeem himsealf. By the way up in checking out my story and review it if you like it? Have a nice day |
| biginferno chapter 43 . 3/22/2019 great story I hope you update and complete this |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/11/2018 Even with the website bugs I enjoyed the uncensored version immensely. Do you intend to finish it? |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/12/2018 This really is awesome. I hope you intend to continue it |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2018 I noticed in the uncensored version some of the pages are a bit funky. This could be cause I am reading on my phone but I don’t think so |
| lara5170 chapter 25 . 11/19/2018 How is Hanabi 12 if Naruto and Hinata's group of genin are all still 12? |
| lara5170 chapter 22 . 11/19/2018 The omake was 7 years ago but wouldn't Naruto have been 5? There are so many age related mistakes within this story that I didn't note. So much of this when pulled together just doesn't make sense. Are you saying that Naruto started his organization when he was just 8? Defeated all these people at 8? Left them all alone for 4 years and they still looked at a mere child seriously? |
| lara5170 chapter 14 . 11/19/2018 Minato wants to tell him everything within minutes of him waking from a coma he has been in for months? |
| lara5170 chapter 12 . 11/19/2018 So does Danzo or Minato know that Naruto has the rinnegan? |