Reviews for A Demon in the Shadows |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing chapter, already looking forward to the next one man! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Epic. Thats the only way to describe the chapters up till now. The characters are epic, the story is epic and the fighting scenes are especially epic. Personally the grammatical mistakes are of little concern to me and I think that you should publish the new chapter in reasonable intervalls, while the grammatical errors can be corrected later on, so that I dont have to wait so long for new chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a fantastic story. Hope you update this story soon. See you next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is there going to be an update or is it just on hiatus/abandoned/discontinued? |
![]() ![]() ![]() One problem with the fight between Naruto and Orochimaru. Naruto could have used human path to remove Orochimaru soul when Orochimaru grabbed him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Since I'm already aware of how it will go I will give you the usual response I give to the idiots who promote Kishimoto's BS: Shove it up your a**, you worthless Kishimoto loving f**kface. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ARHG! B-BUT THE SMUT! WWWAAAAAHHHHHHHH |
![]() ![]() ![]() *smacks forhead* SAI YOU IDIOT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *cries* I want smut scenes! *sobs* taking out the smut ruins the most important part of the book! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.O L-lee...? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit! Minato is intense! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Waited over a year for an update that doesn't even address what's currently happening but a chapter(omake) that should have happened earlier in the story. To have so many issues go unresolved all of this time due to the invasion only to go back in time showing how terrible Naruto's life was instead is not only disappointing and but this marks the end of my concern for this story. Live long and prosper. DB |
![]() ![]() ![]() i just started reading this and i seen (Censored) i do not like this and will no longer read this |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...lemons? Limes? |