Reviews for A Demon in the Shadows |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting chapter let the carnage begin I have to say Yugao Uzuki is codenamed NEKO, not Rabbit. I am surprised u are having Kakashi/Inu as Yugao's student it's the other way around but oh well your story unless u are not having Inu be Kakashi which again is weird, liking Ino being different, I look forward to more, with Anko as his sensei missions should be interesting. Kind of weird he's chaning by being in close proximity to Menma but oh well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So now the demon of the shadows enters the light, wonder how this will go, should have killed the emo shitstain oh well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, Naruto wiping out the Uchiha that's a new one awesome they get what they deserve a clan of losers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, interesting start Minato's an idiot so hopefully Naruto kills him at some point, if not Kushina going by u saying she will be in the harem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() MY PERSONAL OPINION one of the worst fic i ever read this s a haren without accepting it as a harem and you show naruto good even when he fucks yugao and how that yugao is considerate for hayte and says its hayate fault to be rash he fcking loved ugao for years and all se did was giving pussy to naruto who already had fked 5 girls You are suck shit I would never read you sories |
![]() ![]() ![]() Didn't Menma only has the chakra? And if he also has the yin part, Naruto's yang part of Kurama should have known that Menma has his other half and won't mention Menma didn't ask for his permission to use his chakra... |
![]() ![]() ![]() nnnjhh |
![]() ![]() All you write is just porn because that's what this and everything else you write is , pedo incest gangbang porn with no plot |
![]() ![]() This is shot and you are a pedophile |
![]() ![]() ![]() why does Naruto and sai remind me of hidan and kakuzu |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read the uncensored story in the last one it was pretty good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo Why couldn't Ino be on the same team. (I guess it would be too easy and the story would just speed up) Good Chapter! |
![]() ![]() menuts fag lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() So how does a 5 year old boy have a better vocabulary than most people? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lvl 99 Yakuza Boss |