|Reviews for Out of Control|
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/27
| YouJustDoYou14 chapter 3 . 1/4
You can't just stop it right here! Lady, what is wrong with you? I'm about to have a feel attack over here. I desperately need the next chapter!
| bemmet is my otp chapter 3 . 1/1
Update. Update. Please update. I'm begging you if you don't update, I'll cry. I will. I'll do it.
| luvtheheaven chapter 3 . 7/22/2014
I wrote a Glee fanfic about Quinn's canon pregnancy throughout season 1 of that show (Quinn also being 16 at the time of her pregnancy) and yeah I did a lot of research too in order to try to make my pregnancy symptoms and the doctor's appointment as realistic as possible. I understand and appreciate/respect what you did to write the beginning of this. And it seemed VERY believable and well done. I love Bay appreciating Daphne being there for her although she'd never tell her. I would like to think if we saw Daphne's POV, we'd see that Daphne knows that Bay appreciates it, regardless. :P I love Bay continually seeing her own reflection and being reminded of how young she is - being embarrassed to swing her legs like a child in the doctor's office - etc. ;)
And of course, gosh, PLEASE write Emmett's reaction! This cliffhanger is just cruel. :P
I hate that this fic seems to be abandoned, because it really is so amazing so far and there is just SO much potential for amazingness in the later chapters.
| luvtheheaven chapter 2 . 7/22/2014
I love this chapter so much too. ;)
| luvtheheaven chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
This was a FANTASTIC first chapter. I was in the mood to read an M-rated Switched at Birth fic today, I guess, and I sorted by "most favorited", and yours was 5th from the top... and I liked the description, so I clicked. I love your writing style. I know this fic will end on a cliffhanger and you haven't updated it in like a year (because I peeked at the reviews) but gosh I WANT you to update this. So badly. Because I *am* going to read chapters 2 and 3. I have to. You made this first chapter so freaking good. You're an amazingly talented writer. Hell, I'm even adding you to my Author Alerts in case you write a new Switched at Birth (or Harry Potter, or any other fandom I actually know) fic someday instead of updating this one, because I want to be notified and given the chance to read it. ;) You're amazing, and I wish you'd finish this story. (And yes, the story concept may be a little cliche, but your story is too well done for it to FEEL cliche at all. It just feels REAL.)
| ohmyyyfanfiction chapter 3 . 4/24/2014
Great story... that you'll be finishing right!? I see that's been a while since you updated, but I really hope you do (and soon)! What a cliffhanger! I thought you captured the characters nicely, and you definitely have a unique twist to the original show. Kudos.
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/25/2014
I know this story was kinda left awhile ago but I really hope you finish the story! I realllllly wanna know what happens
| dulciwik chapter 3 . 3/7/2014
Please update! Love this story!
| freckled98 chapter 3 . 3/5/2014
Enjoyed. Please continue
| oltlfan23 chapter 3 . 1/25/2014
R u going to be finishing this anytime soon? It needs to be finished. It is sooooooo good!
| Twilighter4Existence chapter 3 . 1/21/2014
Really love this story! Sucks that u stopped at suck a huge cliffhanger though...r u gonna finish this story?
| melody.steinman chapter 3 . 11/23/2013
Awww! You're doing an excellent job of writing this story! :-D You're encompassing the characters very nicely!
| Kiwiflea chapter 3 . 11/19/2013
I know you haven't updated in a long time, but I wanted to tell you that I really like what you have so far. I think you've got Bay totally in character, and I hope that you'll tell more of their story.
| leathersilk chapter 3 . 8/23/2013
Update soon! Love this story!