Reviews for The Magi's Sword
Anonymous chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
Is the OC a reference to Persona 3?
will chapter 6 . 5/29/2013
Pretty nice. The humor scene where Minato runs while laughing is a good one! But I have a few request If I may. In this story Minato accompanies Nagi for a while, but why is he weaker than Setsuna? and what is his elemental affinity? anyway, keep up the good work and I await your next chapter
WhiteWings chapter 6 . 5/28/2013
Awesome chap! And HAH! Poor Minato got beat up XD haha And love the ending of the chap were Setsuna beat up Minato! XD
leo247 chapter 6 . 5/28/2013
Can Minato please chang rooms if Setsuna's going to keep doing that.
Whitewings chapter 5 . 5/25/2013
Haha awesome chap! This was funny and awe poor minato and Negi they had to drink that potion! XD and oh dam now Konoka is hittin on Minato! DUN DUN DUHHHNNNN!
And wait! What will Setsuna do? DOUBLE DUN DUHHH DUUHHHNNNN! •_•
Will chapter 5 . 5/25/2013
I have seen in both of your stories you write that you write really fast. Although some points in the story like details need some improvement, it will in time. Anyway yhis is a pretty interesting story, but it's a pity the OC is not so strong. Anyway keep up the good work and I await your next chapter
WhiteWings chapter 4 . 5/23/2013
Haha this was an awesome and funny chap! GREAT JOB! XD
WhiteWings chapter 3 . 5/23/2013
Ok never mind NOW this just got real!
WhiteWings chapter 2 . 5/23/2013
Dang on the ending I was like "awe! Dam someone's Pissed XD" haha anyways awesome chapter! But one thing I though u said Konoka didn't remember him because of repressed memories? But then you said that Lonoka was upset about not rooming with her child hood friend :/ well idk it could just be me but oh well I still
Loved this chap and now time for chapter 3! So JA NE!
PCheshire chapter 3 . 5/23/2013
please give Minato a pactio with the thousand master Nagi but make him keep it a secret as much as possible! pleeeeeeeeeeeeease! you can even use the reason that he's embarrassed that they had to kiss each other due to not having enough time to make a proper one that doesn't involve kissing(please use this)! and also want Negi to find his father without him supporting/babying him too much! therefore no one but him and Nagi knows...
uub chapter 3 . 5/22/2013
Great story mate,nice writing style & almost flawless grammar,keep up the great work
WhiteWings chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
Wow this is totally awesome! I like the way you wrote this(: totally amazing job and I would love to read more so keep up the good work and update soon please!((: