Intriguing and well written, thanks for the story.

I LOVED the story. It was just so clever! And surprising.
Your story-telling is very unique. Less focus on the surrounding, more on the conversation.
I thought the way you described the banter between John and Sherlock was perfect. They were both completely in character, even in John's dreams.
I loved the way you put in the lady with the pink hair and the one with the green eyes, and the couple holding hands, and the woman with the three boys. It was just enough for me to get suspicious after a few chapters, but not to realize what's been there all along. I loved that.
I thought John's awake-moments were very well-done. I really liked the fact that at some point there was a chapter with many first meetings, because it made the scene really frantic and fast and confusing for John.
I liked how John insisted they met on the train, then the shop and pub, and how confused and desperate he was. It was heart-breaking, and very well-done!
I especially liked how you ended it, or rather, how you opened the epilogue, with the dream once again, and how John recognized that it was a dream and dream-Sherlock did, too. It was somewhat nostalgic.
Oh, and I loved the fact that John had been tortured to insanity by Moran. Might make me a bad person, but it was actually a pretty fantastic idea (and very original, too) as to how John became hospitalized. It was very nice that the design changed in those scenes with Moran, too, making it seem like a flashback (which, apparently, it was!) and not another dream or reality.
I liked that you opened each chapter with "They met in a...". I liked that you kept that sentence even in the scenes where he woke up in the hospital in reality.
I'm babbling. Sorry.
I'll just end this with a final note:
You. Are. An. Artist.
(And this definitely goes on my favourites list!)

God,this storie is fantastic!I was thinking about going to bed when I clicked on it,and now...well,lets just say its considerably later and I'm in a considerably better story and great writing.:)

This was amazing. Wow. I mean ... WOW! You had me hook, line, and sinker from the first few sentences and I have read with rapt attention and insatiable thirst right up to such a completely satisfying and wonderful end. Seriously - this has been truly a fantastic ride and I don't quite think I'm ready to return to reality yet. This is definitely something I will read and re-read again and again ... thank you, thank you, thank you! I mean it - well done you! :)

That was an amazing story ! So IC and very well written :) I really liked it :D

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You told me once that you weren’t a sure about this story… um.. there were times I didn’t even understand the story, but, let me tell you this: you were the best author and story… story teller I’ve ever known, and no-one will ever convince me that this story isn't great, that’s… uh. There.

I was so alone, and I owe you so much.

Look, please, there’s just one more thing, one more thing, one more miracle, Qalet, for me. Don’t. Be. Done. Would you do that, just for me, just… stop it. Stop this!
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...Sorry I had to do this xD Break the ice and all yeah?... From one Sherlock fan to another this is a wonderful story and I loved the plot and your writing style :) I hope to read more from you soon! :)

Nice! _

Nice!

Loved it!

This was incredible. :D I absolutely loved it.

Holy smokes. This story was amazingly structured, the repetition of "they meet in a..." was a fantastic opener to each chapter/scene and the ending was wonderful. The entire time I was just thinking, "EXPLANATION, PLEASE!"

Needless to say, I'm glad I read it when it was completed or the suspense would have killed me. In other words, brilliant fic and well done.

I can't start to describe how beautiful this is, i loved every chapter, and i grew more and more attatched to your story and now that is oer is just making me want to cry in a corner! Really! Wonderful story, i cried, laughed and i got so many mixed emotions while reading this, i'm sorry i never left a review before, i tend to wait to be finished :b

Anyway, i really hope to see more of you work, you're really talented! Keep going! :3

You new fan
Napelu

PD: forgive my spelling mistakes please, english is not my main language

I have no idea why but this story made me cry at least three times. It was beautifully written and very touching. It's rare to find a story of this quality with so many chapters. Thank you for writing this.

Wow, bravo. Great story my favorite, absolute favorite return of sherlock fic yet. I wish this is how they would really do it in the series. I am going to sugest this to all my sherlock lovers. You are great, thank you for finishing. If this story had stopped I think I would have gone crazy.

Andrea

I've just spent the last few hours reading this and when I first started I thought it was going to be a fic about John and Sherlock meeting on a train and then, I don't know, meeting again and living together and stuff, but the second Sherlock asked if he could hear him my heart fell and oh god I knew it wasn't going to be easy. But it was so wonderful and you scared me so much with the first half of the last chapter. I loved this. Thank you for writing it.