|Reviews for The Restoration of Simon Petrikov|
| TheLittleBlueFrog chapter 4 . 3/1
AAAAAARRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH I NEEEEDDD MORE OF THIS! :D Please write more for me and everyone else! FOR DA FROG!
| TealGurl chapter 4 . 11/29/2013
So far so good man! Keep up the good work! A few tips for ya,
1: Keep it natural and silly. (It's Adventure time!)
2: Show don't tell!
3: If it's what you're shooting for, make sure to keep characters faithful. A friendly suggestion/example: FP has anger issues, so an outburst ever now and then is perfectly fine.
Over all dude, it's pretty darn good though! Definitely love your ideas and can't wait to read more!
| Elizabeth.J chapter 4 . 10/21/2013
This is Awesome! please write more I want to see what happens to the Ice king/Simon Petrikov story or the jewels do something. Please write more its so awesome ! :D O
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/26/2013
Very nice story, looking forward to the next part. Keep it up.
| Bellyacher chapter 4 . 8/7/2013
Great chapter! Love how you are trying to add many characters to this story. Hope to read more from this soon
| Quelquely chapter 3 . 7/27/2013
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD! I was wondering if maybe there could be some drama between Marceline and the Ice King. Well, maybe not drama, but, like, they find out what happened between them? In the end, its your choice, but that's just a suggestion.
| StArLaV chapter 3 . 7/5/2013
Please update :D Loving it.
| OMAC001 chapter 3 . 6/1/2013
WHoa, I thought that was destroy! It should help SImon though. Please update soon.
| eloomis4831 chapter 3 . 6/1/2013
Write more! I want to know what happens next
| E chapter 2 . 5/26/2013
An intresting way to get the ball rolling.
| Alice'sLover chapter 2 . 5/25/2013
| The Nephilim King Michael chapter 2 . 5/25/2013
Heh awesome feels in it and its ADVENTURE TIME
Great ch bro
| eloomis4831 chapter 2 . 5/25/2013
| E chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
Short as it is it is something interesting. For fun here is an idea, Prismo said all his wishes had ironic consequences but Jake's didn't because it was supposedly bundled with the Lich's own irony but what if it wasn't. The Lich wished for Finn and Jake to be sent home in Ooo but never specified which set. So it could be made the farm world versions were sent as well and may or may not lie dormant in a block of ice or such and such. Not necessarily an idea for this story but it might find some use with you.
| SMR chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
Has potential! Me likey