Reviews for Always a problem |
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![]() ![]() ![]() more updates please very good read |
![]() ![]() I don’t know if you are still on or what but if you ARE still on could you PLEASE finish this! I love how the plot is and it kinda reminds me of Richelle Mead. This would be a fabulous finished product |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Chapters 28 and 29 are the same but anyway more updates please love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow nice to have you back! I hope that your dads ok! |
![]() ![]() I have tried a couple of times to read your whole story but I can't, if you are going to continue writing I would suggest going back and editing your work starting with chapter one. There are just so many mistakes misspelled and misused words (mostly because they were close to the word you are trying to spell) that it is hard to read. Which is a shame because you have a decent plot line. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Can't Wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really can't wait to see where you carry us. Keep it up, can't wait for an update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update as soon as possible! |
![]() ![]() YESSSSS! I need more! When is the next chapter coming out?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So in case you feel like no one wants to read your story. I NEED TO READ YOUR STORY! i just keep thinking about it and when i read a book and keep thinking about it it means i love it and I keep thinking about the story and its just so good, I love it so i hope you keep writing the story and know that people do enjoy it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story I'm hooked and I need more keep writing its so good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok...so the doc was a jerk, no two ways about that. But why was he arrested? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I need more pllllllleeeeeaaaaassssseeeeeee |